Heavenly System: Why Cultivate If I Have A System?
In the Great Immortal World, everyone wants to ascend to Immortality through cultivation... except Su Login.
[Connection restored with a new Host.]
[Due to the new connection, the Player's level has been reset to Level 1.]
Waking up in the talentless cultivator Su Login's body, the Hero from another world goes against the terrible fate that was reserved for him.
Training while they are cross-legged, killing monsters to get XP while they refine pills, kicking demonic cultivators' asses while they are reclusive.
Distancing himself from the orthodox cultivation of this world, Su Login decided that he would reach the peak, killing any enemy that came his way with his combat experience from the previous world.
600 Power Stones = +1 Extra Chapter
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Contents
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Arc 01: Plain of The Ancient Peach Tree (ongoing)
- Volume 01: Starting Over With a New System (01-16)
- Volume 02: The Peach Tree Trial (ongoing)
- Volume 03: The War of the Minor Sects
Arc 02: Infernal Volcano
Arc 03: Submerged City
Arc 04: Mount Weiwei
Arc 05: Endless Dungeon
Shameless author here (again). I think having written 100k words gives me the right to come here and do another review and answer some questions. I'm writing chapter 72 as I write this review and I have to say that the quality of my writing has improved a lot, mainly due to the amount of content I've read since I wrote the first chapter. Below I'll answer a few questions and tell you whether this novel is worth reading or not "Does this webnovel have harem?" No. I have nothing against harem, I've even written novels with harem, but Su Login's personality is more suited to a monogamous relationship. "So is there romance?" Yes. Many people might be afraid of that, but the romance here is something more discreet and I'm developing it little by little. "Does Su Login hate swords?" I've seen a lot of those comments. Some people hate sword users, others love them, so I'll tell you what is explained throughout the story: Su Login's spice is long-range weapons. He doesn't hate swords, but he prefers weapons like spears. "Why is there some confusing information in the first few chapters?" Well, I published the first chapters and spent 10 months without writing due to lack of time, and when I got back to writing I ended up forgetting some small details (hehe). It's nothing too serious or that interferes with the reader's experience, but I'll do a revision to improve it. "So, Is this novel worth reading?" Yes! Of course it is! Go ahedad and enjoy the story!
The first person to like their own work should be its author.Hello, this is the Author. If you like the story, or have any criticism, leave your review here, it help me to improve and know what readers think about what I write.Finally, thank you for reading, and I hope you have fun on this journey!
Novel muito boa e promissora... Ainda não terminei de ler ela, mas até agora está sendo uma leitura muito agradável de se acompanhar. Embora não seja meu tipo de novel, a narrativa me prendeu bastante.
The idea of the novel is great, and I like to see the constant progress the mc is making, keep it up author!
A well-written novel with good grammar and a cohesive story. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]