The Eldrim Cards Legacy

5/5 The best novel I have red in the last couple month. It has an immense potential, as long as author does not mess it ups. World building is amazing an interesting plot calm and collected mc who makes reasonable choices, he has his own negative side but who doesn't . I would say this novel has an potential to be in the tops one day. RECOMMEND!!!!!!!

This is a great story so far. I've waited until the end of Volume 1 to give my review. Overall, I think the novel is quite unique, blending different elements from various genres, which I found both captivating and thrilling. The main character is exactly as he should be. In terms of his initial awareness and the adventures he experiences, he is gradually becoming overpowered, but the writing has handled his development perfectly so far, in my opinion. The world has a sense of mysticism and feels dangerous, which I really enjoyed. I think it would be great to include more details later on, perhaps about the world's background and the reasoning behind its divisions. Other than that, I had a fantastic time reading, and I'll continue to support both this novel and the author. Cheers!

The 3 main things I find make this a masterpiece are: 1) The level of details is amazing it’s like you are learning with the MC and yet it’s not over the top every thing we find out gives more depth to this crazy world. 2)MC isn’t overpowered he is strong but he is deserving of his strength and every time he gets “lucky” it comes with hurdles that justify the “luck” and to be honest when I say strong it may be misleading as in this world everyone is strong even the birds and the bees(not a spoiler but one of the best lines in the novel in my opinion so read until this sentence makes sense to you and I promise you’ll be hooked). 3)the characters from MCs family to his friends we know basically nothing about them yet the level of details of that nothing is amazing especially MCs dad the man is deserving of his own novel and he is definitely not alone in that regard(although he is especially deserving of one) So yeah a Masterpiece go read it trust me it’s worth it

Mandatory shameless author review: this is an excellent book with an exceptionally handsome author- I mean main character. I put a lot of work into the world and story for this, and have every intention to maintain a high quality of work throughout. There will be some humour here and there, I literally cannot avoid it even if I wished, but the book will generally be much more serious and dark compared to my other work if you are familiar with it. Please do give this a try. I hope you like it!

The author’s writing skills have progressed since his previous work, The Innkeeper, particularly in that expectations set are upheld. The storyline and setting are great. The characters are decent and likable. However, the writing quality itself needs improvement. On the minor side, there are plentiful small grammatical errors, run-on sentences, and a notable amount of info dumping.  The work’s major flaw is the unnecessary, indirect, awkward, and abstract phrasing. This is particularly glaring in action scenes. Too often the MC’s direct senses are avoided or obfuscated. Instead, there is an uncalled-for post-analysis topdown view of events. It takes the reader out of the action.  Direct advice to the author: Please use direct phrasing. Write “It was this,” rather than, “He felt it was this,” or “He knew it was this,” or “It seemed like it was this.” Describe the MC experiences without processing them through a third party’s perspective. Avoid abstractions in fight scenes. Don’t write “Their fight, almost too fast for Nero to follow, seemed like a masterwork of a performance,” (quick example from chapter 9). Instead, write what is being sensed. For example, “A series of clangs rang out, as Invictus’s spear parried the colorful blur of magical sword attacks with masterful precision.” The second quote conveys similar information in a more detailed, direct, and exciting fashion. It gives us direct sound and sight without referring to Nero as the filter. This work could shine and garner greater popularity with an external editor or better self-editing that pays particular attention to the above flaws.

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I like book. I review book. More people read book, author writes even more book. I happy.

the story starts like the drawing of a painting, slowly adding color,yeti even in the early chapter we got a lot of plot points. I see some Connection between Grant and Lex, I hope he will bloom in a beatifull new character. Good luck author and great job so far.

Heavily underrated, writing is as good as it gets, flows really well. The MC is near-perfect but still has his imperfections and LEARNS from them. Wholesome family moments, no harem, unique and simple power system as well as past mystery/history that ties everything together perfectly and gets the mind running with ideas. If there’s one thing you should take from this review, it’s that you should read it. [img=recommend]

Man I just gotta say that I absolutely love the way you write. I’ve been a full privilege supporter of The InnKeeper for almost a year now and in my eyes, it’s absolutely worth it. I can’t believe you are writing a second book but was filled with joy at the fact that I have accidentally stacked 200 more chapters to read. Only 15 chapters deep into this one and I already fell in love again. 5 stars as always man keep at it

solid read, some sections of chapters are kinda info dumpy but other than that it's super good so far I really enjoy it

Everything is awesome thus far (chap 117)! Both of Lifesketchers novels are certainly like a breath of fresh air. Lots of engaging aspects. Small spoiler —-> Nero's way of thinking is espessialy interesting and conductive to personal growth.

A Masterpiece with Immense Potential – Highly Recommended I am thoroughly enjoying this novel so far (up to Chapter 293), and I can confidently say it’s one of the best I’ve read recently. The characters are incredibly well-written, with impressive character development that keeps me invested in their growth. The world-building is also exceptional, with a unique and expansive power system that feels fresh and engaging. The variety of concepts introduced so far adds so much depth to this world, making it feel alive and complex. One of the standout features of the story is the way it handles the pacing and plot. The novel carefully balances the progression of the main character (MC) with the development of the world around him, including intricate politics, faction struggles, and power plays. I love the focus on intelligence, with the MC using his brain to navigate complex situations, and the quality of storytelling has been maintained consistently. That said, I do have some minor concerns. While I appreciate the author’s decision to gradually reveal the world alongside the MC’s growth, I can’t help but feel that the focus on lower-level power struggles seems a bit excessive at times. The interactions between high-level beings and low-level individuals could be a bit more nuanced, and it feels like the world’s power dynamics might seem narrow-minded in certain places. I also wonder how much the presence of powerful sages, who can detect lies and emotions, plays into the current betrayals and power struggles. It feels like the author is leaving some of these details for future exploration, so I’m curious to see how they unfold. Another point I’ve been reflecting on is the statement that humans are at the bottom of the food chain, and the belief that they lack the innate ability to control aether. While this sets up the human race as vulnerable, the phrasing feels like it’s setting up expectations for rival races who can wield aether innately—like elves or other classic fantasy races. The lack of mention of such races so far feels like a bit of an oversight or a deliberate mystery yet to be unveiled. It leaves me wondering if there’s more to the world’s hierarchy that’s yet to be explored. Despite these minor concerns, I have thoroughly enjoyed the novel and am confident it will continue to evolve in exciting and satisfying ways. I highly recommend giving it a try—this is truly one of the best stories I’ve come across, and I believe it has the potential to keep getting better with each chapter.

I wanted to read this novel but it seems to be on hiatus? Has the author addressed anything? or is it dropped?? …………,……..,,,…………………………………… …………………………………………………………..