Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City

After the DxD story, this is the lowest it has fallen, the protagonist's personality is no longer charismatic, it is insufferable, the interactions only focus on whether she is a woman, the protagonist drools if he is a man , kisses the protagonist's feet, there is no longer any coercion or anything. It is surprising to see how this author remained silent about this.

Trash story, trash mc, trash character development, trash characters in general. MC is a complete idiot who the author makes a "genius" lowering the iq of the rest of the characters, he has it all granted (That orphan start was literally nothing), the women basically just throw themselves at him, just another garbage fanfic that nobody should read. Author has made a lot of fanfics and should have experience but always makes the same errors and even more.

Honest review. I mean, it's a akikan novel, and he never tried to change his style of writing. MC is actually not a villain this time but just "trying" to be the good guy. Again, sometimes the logic MC uses doesn't make sense, just like any other akikan novel. And I don't doubt that his whole personality will change through out the whole novel several times. At Least this novel isn't as slow paced as the other ones. I do like that he is experiencing with his system and the DNA stuff, that makes it interesting, even more interesting than the other systems. Very bad writing(as per usual if akikan), As it is written like it for 10 year olds. Can't really say much as it's only in it's early chapters. But I hope he doesn't ruin the story like he usually does in his other novels or uses no logic for the characters. It's a entertaining novel to read but also a bad one. [4/30/2024]

A new Akikan's fanfic i hope this is good like others. He has the ability to obtain the dna of animals to strengthen himself and can also transform into that animal as he wish. This ability have a good potential, imagine being able to obtain the dna of other races or dna of mythical and magical creatures. Also imagine if he can get a dna of eldritch creatures

Akikan's I just hope this fanfic will have long chapters and I hope the overall quality of the story in the future remains good, as usual. And congratulations on your new fanfic.😁😁😁😁😁

Very annoying reading experience thanks to the childishly petty mc, the girls instantly falling in love with him just by meeting him and the overall disrespect shown by the mc, oh and the novel needs some proof-reading. The dna system is broken but it's also really interesting.

it feels like all his characters are the same person just with different names, I feel sorry for those whom he adds to his fanfiction, he completely kills their character, brain and uniqueness

the author's big flaw is the inconsistency with the protagonist's powers, which never seem to evolve or are not explained, a being that absorbed so much DNA was supposed to have enormous potential, any comic book villain that absorbed so much dnd from different species was continental level. the story was cool but the plot basically keeps going around and around, the MC goes to some world and makes a harem, absorbs some of people's DNA and just.

The writing is pretty good but all your main characters act like someone that has gotten a lobotomy.

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5B without a doubt rag, why? Since this is Akikan Bruh, there's no need to question the fanfic. But what I regret is the lack of 18+ scenes in each fanfic

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I've waited for this guy's new fanfic to be released for months now. And thank the heavens he made a new one.

Pretty much a crack fic. Leave logic at the door if you want to enjoy the story, and remember; the MC is a Good Guy. Except for all the times they aren't, but it's justifiable because morality is decided by the mc and everyone agrees. Also