Pokemon: Reborn as ash , Make up for your regrets and become stronger
On the first of his Pokemon journey, Ash/Satoshi awakened the memory of his past life and obtained A system will generate tasks and give all Pokemon related items. Knowing the trajectory of his future life, he decisively chose to make up for the regrets of his past life.
Pokemon releaser?
[You refused to release the pidgeot and received the reward: Potential Evolution Ribbon]
[You refused to send the primape and received the reward: MewtwoX Mega Evolution Stone]
Change the Region level and clear it?
[You use Champion Pikachu to defeat Rookie Trip. The opponent doubts his life and gets the reward: full Mastery of Aura]
Region competition companion runner?
[You defeat the mystrious trainer Tobias and get the reward: One of three creation dragons dragon of antimatter giratina; title: Dragon Lord]
Will you remain single* forever?
[You have obtained the "harem protagonist aura", and the harmony of the harem +10]
*Robbing Pokémon?
[You break paul's leg and send him to a juvenile detention center and get the reward: "One ball into the soul" title (throwing a Poké Ball has a probability of directly recovering the mythical Pokémon) ]
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This is a Chinese translation fanfic I removed all the Chinese elements as mush as I can I fully rewrite the chapters with my own style if you like it please support
Is a pretty good fanfic but still lacks quality on the translation, still that can be fixed, so translator do your best. Also to help you a little, use software to help you translate better, grammarly, chatgpt, etc. All of those are free and make your translation slightly more easy. Still, good job!
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read up to 30 chaps. and still writing has no improvement yet my brain had enough🤯💀💀💀,,like what is this - ("but now ash can earn his own money and travel without having to work so hard for his mother delia" totally different from what you wish to express) and a lot more of mistakes like this or even worse in every chapter, i repeat every chapter that reader's has to wrack their brains to make sense of what you want to express. so rather than releasing multiples off chap. in a short span of time, you could just take your time to write a better quality (just my suggestion though as it's up to you) WRITING QUALITY- 1⭐ UPDATING STABILITY- 5⭐ STORY DEVELOPMENT-4⭐ CHARACTER DESIGN- 4⭐ WORLD BACKGROUND- 5⭐ 4⭐ for the story development as i didn't reach the depth to judge your story.
Excellent original story, if it can no longer be considered a translation, try reading the Chinese MTL and it is garbage. Keep it up. More
as its a fanfic thats just released , it pretty good , dont know how update stability will be . still looking forwward for more.
Mr. author, you forgot about Sonia in galar, it is great material for waifu.................................... ................................................ . .................................................. .................................................. ... .................................................. .................................................. ...........................
It is a pretty good Pokémon fanfic and the story evolves every moment, especially the love for how it develops, exists and succeeds, good history
Everything is good about your story except for all the bad grammar and writing errors that plague every single chapter (if possible can you please go back and fix them so this story can become better to read)
I enjoy the pacing and fluid interactions with the characters. I do like that the author does pay attention to what the reader opinion, but still has his own clear vision. I will offer ideas in some of my comments, feel free to use them if I can inspire your creative flow for putting out more chapters. I hope to see where you decide to take your story and bring it to life. I appreciate the time and effort you spent on it. P.S. I'll be using this gif for any future ideas I'll will offer.
this novel started as a translation but the author made great changes to the story and made it so better than the original novel. keep it up and give more updates.
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Interesting story, i always hated the fact,how Ash/Satoshi, just left behind some of his Pokemons and never come back for them.Sure in Pokemon Journey we have some comebacks from his older Pokemons, but no everyone,another thing is him just restarting everything, each time he travels to another region, and taking only Pikachu with him,and never again calling back his other Pokemon who are left on Profesor Oak ranch.
Very good translation and novel, hope that you keep updating it ...........................................................................
Author where are you now? Your work has so much potential and so is beautiful pls continue it.
could've been a good story, too bad even if the translator/editor is doing a good job but the OG work still shows a gross charizard fanboy... you could feel the toxic masculinity of the insecure tiny peepee chinese author when it didn't want to evolve bulbasaur cause Venusaur and Ivysaur have flowers