Chapter 10: In the Shadow of Loss: The Day They Left Us (5)
MC pov-
System I want to use unlimited revision. So, can you tell me how many years I have? Mo Fan asked.
[5 Years]
Why is it 5 years? Shouldn't be 10 years? Mo Fan asked with confusion.
[If you were in Qi Symphony then it should have been 10 years. But you're only in the fortification realm still within the mortal boundary. 5 years is a free benefit given.]
Alright, then use 5 years on my Qi cultivation technique. Mo Fan said dejectedly.
{Suddenly a large amount of information started to pour into his mind. As if he had been cultivating Qi Technique for 5 years without a break}
To think my Qi Cultivation Technique would reach Peak Mastery. I was already at Advanced Mastery and thought that it would 10 or more years to make it to the Peak Mastery realm. If I remember the comprehension level of a technique goes from low to high:
Basic Understanding
Initial Mastery
Proficient Mastery
Advanced Mastery
Expert Mastery
Peak Mastery
I think there should be a realm above this since I can feel it but I can't touch it.
System use 5 years on Unified Veil Dispersal Technique, Celestial Soul Resonance Technique, Elemental Iron Harmonization Technique.
A huge amount of information started to pour into Mo Fan's mind as if he had been training for years for each technique trying to reach a new realm}
"After he exhaled a turbid air"
Finally, all my techniques reached Peak Mastery.
Now, system use 5 years for my cultivation of Qi, Body, and Soul. Mo Fan said with ecstasy.
{sound of breaking through}
Finally, I have reached the peak of each realm.
System show my status
[Status
- Name: Mo Fan
- Age: 7 (33)
- Talent: Unlimited
- Qi Cultivation: master Fortifier peak (2300/10800)
- Body Cultivation: Refinement Realm 2nd stage Muscle Fortification (1000/13500)
- Soul Cultivation: Soul Awakening Realm 3rd Level Soul Illumination level (0/27000)
- Techniques: Unified Veil Dispersal Technique, Elemental Iron Harmonization Technique, Qi Orbit Infusion Technique, Celestial Soul Resonance Technique.
- Inventory: Empty
- *Soul Item: None
- Title: Reincarnated, Perfect Prodigy, The one#*$%!&^, Fan'er
Mission/Quests
Shop
Map]
Now, I just want to know my strength level compared to my peers. Since not everyone can cultivate QI, Body, and Soul.
No, I have to go home before it's too late.
{When Mo Fan stoop up and started to run}
Argh! I should have bought a movement technique. No, I don't need to worry since there is time for me. I can just buy it tomorrow.
hey, system can I anything from system's store? Mo Fan asked while running.
[No, you still don't have SP(System Points)]
Like I thought.
{After a few minutes when he reached his home. A crowd gathered in Infront of his house}
Hmm? Where is my house? what are these people doing here by gathering? Mo Fan asked with a small voice to the point that no one heard it.
No, I am sure my House is here. I can't be wrong about it. But why can't I see my house's roof? No, I need to go in front of everyone to see. It should be because of my height.
(I just hope it's not what I think it is. Something that happens in a novel)
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Revised version
System, I want to use unlimited revision. How many years do I have? Mo Fan's voice echoed in the empty space around him, his mind racing with the possibilities.
[Five years.]
Five years? Mo Fan frowned, confusion seeping into his voice. Shouldn't it be ten years?
[If you were in the Qi Symphony Realm, it would indeed be ten years. However, you are still within the Fortification Realm, bound by the mortal boundary. The five years is a free benefit.]
Mo Fan let out a sigh, the weight of his limitations pressing down on him. Alright then, use the five years on my Qi cultivation technique, he instructed, his tone tinged with disappointment.
{Suddenly, a vast stream of information flooded into Mo Fan's consciousness, as though he had been tirelessly cultivating his Qi Technique for five uninterrupted years.}
The sensation was overwhelming, like the surge of a mighty river through a narrow gorge, carving deeper into the essence of his being. His mind swirled with the knowledge and experience of half a decade condensed into mere moments. As the storm of information subsided, clarity dawned on him.
To think my Qi Cultivation Technique would reach Peak Mastery... Mo Fan mused, awe coloring his thoughts. I was already at Advanced Mastery and assumed it would take ten or more years to ascend to Peak Mastery. If I recall correctly, the levels of comprehension for a technique progress from low to high:
Basic Understanding
Initial Mastery
Proficient Mastery
Advanced Mastery
Expert Mastery
Peak Mastery
I feel there should be a realm beyond this… something elusive, just out of reach…
The thought lingered in his mind like an unsolved puzzle, a challenge that beckoned him to push further. But for now, there were other matters to attend to.
System, use the remaining five years on the Unified Veil Dispersal Technique, Celestial Soul Resonance Technique, and Elemental Iron Harmonization Technique, Mo Fan commanded, determination replacing the earlier disappointment.
{Once again, torrents of knowledge and experience cascaded into Mo Fan's mind, each technique unfolding its secrets to him as if he had spent years mastering them. The sense of time stretched and contracted, bending to his will.}
When the flood finally ebbed, Mo Fan exhaled deeply, releasing a breath he hadn't realized he was holding. The air around him seemed to tremble with the force of his newfound power.
Finally, all my techniques have reached Peak Mastery, Mo Fan whispered, his voice barely audible over the thundering beat of his heart. Now, System, use five years to advance my cultivation of Qi, Body, and Soul. His voice rose with a mix of excitement and anticipation.
{The sound of barriers shattering echoed through the void as Mo Fan's cultivation surged forward, breaking through each realm with a force that resonated within his very soul.}
When the final barrier fell, Mo Fan stood still, feeling the power coursing through every fiber of his being. He had reached the pinnacle of his current realms—Qi, Body, and Soul, each resonating with the peak of mastery.
System, show my status, he ordered, a sense of pride swelling within him.
**[Status]
Name: Mo Fan
Age: 7 (33)
Talent: Unlimited
Qi Cultivation: Master Fortifier Peak (2300/10800)
Body Cultivation: Refinement Realm 2nd Stage, Muscle Fortification (1000/13500)
Soul Cultivation: Soul Awakening Realm 3rd Level, Soul Illumination Level (0/27000)
Techniques: Unified Veil Dispersal Technique, Elemental Iron Harmonization Technique, Qi Orbit Infusion Technique, Celestial Soul Resonance Technique.
Inventory: Empty
Soul Item: None
Title: Reincarnated, Perfect Prodigy, The One#*$%!&^, Fan'er
Mission/Quests
Shop
Map]
Mo Fan's eyes scanned the status screen, a slight smile playing on his lips. I wonder how my strength compares to my peers, he thought, curiosity mingling with satisfaction. Not everyone can cultivate Qi, Body, and Soul simultaneously...
But then, a sudden thought jolted him back to reality. No, I have to go home before it's too late!
As Mo Fan rose to his feet, ready to sprint, a sharp pain shot through his legs. Argh! I should have bought a movement technique! he cursed himself, grimacing. No, there's still time. I can buy it tomorrow.
System, can I buy anything from the store now? he asked while pushing himself forward, his feet pounding against the ground.
[No, you do not have enough SP (System Points).]
Like I thought... he sighed, but kept moving, the urgency of his mission pushing him onward.
As he approached his home, a sense of dread began to creep into his heart. A crowd had gathered in front of what should have been his house, but something was wrong—terribly wrong.
Where is my house? Mo Fan murmured, his voice a mere whisper lost in the crowd's murmuring. He pushed forward, his heart pounding in his chest. No, this can't be... My house should be here. I know it's here! Why can't I see it?
His mind raced, fear clawing at the edges of his thoughts. I just hope it's not what I think it is...
He pushed his way through the crowd, each step heavier than the last, a sinking feeling growing in his chest. Please, let it not be what happens in those stories...
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