Chapter 12: Crash to a New World (2)

Revised version

"Argh! Argh!" Mo Fan's cries of pain reverberated through the dense, shadowy forest, his body writhing under the crushing weight of the Elder's aura. This pressure... it's like a mountain bearing down on me. What kind of monster is he? Mo Fan thought, gasping for air, his vision swimming as the force threatened to shatter his bones.

The forest around them was eerily silent, the trees standing as dark sentinels to the unfolding scene. The Elder's voice cut through the stillness like a knife, cold and merciless. "Kid, you better tell me where you're from," he demanded, his gaze piercing through the darkness. "My patience is running out, and so is your time."

Mo Fan's heart pounded in his chest, each beat a painful reminder of his helplessness. "I... I can tell you where I'm from," he gasped, barely able to form the words as the pressure eased ever so slightly, giving him a fleeting moment of relief. "I come from..." He paused, feeling the Elder lean in, anticipating his answer.

A sudden surge of fury and despair erupted within Mo Fan, his voice exploding with venomous rage. "Your death!" he roared, his shout echoing through the trees, filled with the suffocating anger that had built up within him.

[Host, what are you doing? Do you have a death wish?] The System's voice rang out in his mind, frantic and filled with alarm.

[No, I don't want to die,] Mo Fan shot back, his thoughts a seething storm of cold fury. [But the memory of them killing the only person I ever loved... it's driving me insane. Even now, under this unbearable pressure, I want to see them suffer. I want them to feel the pain I've felt, to understand that neither life nor death will save them from the torment they deserve.] His thoughts were as cold and sharp as a blade, the very air around him seeming to chill.

The Elder's expression twisted into a mask of rage. "You insolent whelp! You dare to defy me?!" His voice was thunderous, filled with a hatred that seemed to darken the forest itself. "If you won't answer me, then you will die here, alone and forgotten!" His killing intent surged, crashing down on Mo Fan like a tidal wave, forcing the breath from his lungs.

"Elder! Where are you?!" Yu Mian's voice echoed faintly through the trees, filled with urgency and fear. "Elder...!" His voice was distant, barely penetrating the suffocating aura surrounding Mo Fan.

The Elder's eyes flickered with impatience as he heard her distant cries. "The young master is looking for me," he muttered, his tone laced with frustration. "I need to end this quickly before he grows angry."

With that, the Elder unleashed the full force of his power on Mo Fan. The forest seemed to tremble under the weight of his aura, the trees groaning as if they might snap under the pressure.

Mo Fan's scream tore through the night, a raw and guttural sound filled with agony. "Arghhh!!!" His body convulsed violently, blood spurting from his mouth as the force of the Elder's power crushed him from the inside.

Am I going to die here, in this cursed forest? Mo Fan's thoughts slowed, a strange calm settling over him as the darkness closed in. I wanted revenge... there's so much left to do... His voice, though trembling with pain, held a chilling resolve, the forest around him seeming to hold its breath.

[Ding! The host is detected to be in a death predicament.]

[Do you want to execute an Emergency Plan?]

The System's words were like a distant echo, a faint glimmer of hope in the overwhelming darkness.

"Do you even need to ask? Of course, yes!!!" Mo Fan screamed in his mind, the desperation in his voice almost tangible.

[Executing Emergency Plan...]

[Searching safe coordinates for host...]

[Searching... searching...]

"System, hurry up!" Mo Fan's mental voice was frantic, his body trembling violently as the Elder's power threatened to tear him apart. "I'm dying here!!"

[Coordinates found: 011123-44532-445567-3003]

[Transporting host to another world...]

Wait, what do you mean by anoth— Mo Fan's thoughts were abruptly cut off, his eyes widening in shock.

Before he could finish his question, a brilliant white light engulfed him. The forest was swallowed by the light, the dark trees and the oppressive aura vanishing in an instant as Mo Fan's body dissolved into the light, leaving nothing behind but the echo of his screams.

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Original version

 (Pained voice)Argh! Argh!.... [This huge pressure is killing me. What cultivation realm is he in?] Mo Fan thought with suffocation.

Kid, you should tell me now where you are coming from. My patience is limited child. Elder said with a cold tone his pressure increasing.

Yes, I can tell you where I come from. I come from.....{As the voice trailed elder's pressure started diminishing}.... Your death!!!. Mo fan shouted with anger and suffocation.

[Host, what are you saying? Do you want to die] System said to Mo Fan.

[No, I don't want to die. But the thought of them killing my first-ever loved one made me lose control of myself. Even now even under pressure, I like to torture them so they would feel my pain. Making them feel them staying alive or dead will not bring them any salvation to them] Mo Fan said to the system in a chilling cold tone that brings a chill to the bone.

You! You! Hmm! Since you don't want to answer me then you should die. Elder said him releasing his killing intent. Making Mo Fan unable to breathe.

Elder, where are you? elder.....!!!. Yu Mian shouted searching where the elder went suddenly without saying a word.

Young Master is looking for me. I need to finish it before the young master gets angry. Elder said with a hurried voice.

{Elder released all his pressure on Mo Fan.}

Haaha!!!! (Pained voice of Mo Fan)

Am I going to die here? I still wanted to get revenge and wanted to do many things. Mo Fan said with a sad yet calm tone.

[Ding, detected Host is in death predicament ]

[Do you want to execute Emergency Plan]

[Yes/No]

Do you even need to ask, of course, yes!!!. Mo Fan shouted in his mind.

[Executing emergency plan]

[Searching safe co-ordinates for host]

[Searching.....searching....]

System, hurry it up! I am going to die!!. Mo Fan Said to the system in his mind with hurried voice.

[Found co-ordinates 011123-44532-445567-3003]

[Transporting host to another world]

Wait, what do you mean by anothe-? Mo Fan was about to ask in a surprised voice.

{Before he could finish his sentence he turned into a white light and disappeared from there.}