Gaming Empire System
Wallace transmigrated to a normal magical world. However, the world is not dominated by Mages, Knights, etc. but by the human Nobles. Normally, nobles are only adept at political and social studies, but in this world, Nobles have magical powers too, called personal dungeons.
To protect their lands and people from magical radiation to live a normal life, the Nobles feed their dungeons with mana users like knights, mages, or magical crystals to clear the radiation—it was an ultimate power that even Mages, Knights, and other Mana users also relied on.
However, a threat came from a lady seeking revenge on the bloodline of his ancestor. If she isn't amused by his dungeon, she would make Wallace's soul go through endless years of suffering. Fortunately, he too happened to have this power as well, and it was much different from normal Nobles because his dungeons are Gaming Dungeons!
However, will this be enough to save himself from this unknown vengeful lady?
Ding!
Gaming Empire System activated!
Note: this novel is inspired by Black tech internet cafe system.
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This is just a test novel, I'm just thinking of this idea for research purposes. Thank you.
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Being 100% honest? The author asked for feedback so I came here with no huge expectations but... I'm quite surprised honestly. The content is refreshing! The ideas of nobles and dungeons being connected... They system. the mysterious woman - they all make me curious and begging for more! I honestly feel sad that it is just a few chapters. I love binge reading and this would have been a perfect read. If I read it when it's so short I'll be so dissatisfied because I'll surely crave more. Keep up the good work author-kun?
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The story is relatively good, but the characters are overly dramatic/emotional, they are characters that get scared easily for no good reason, overthink everything, cry for an unnecessary long period of time, & the worst was the M.C feeling sad for something as stupid as killing a dungeon monster. Everything else aside, as someone who transmigrated from earth, he is very aware of the fact that this is a game, moreover, there are monsters, so why the hell will he feel sad about killing them?😩 This story would have been really great if it was not poorly executed, but, despite its flaws, the story feels fresh & will keep you hooked.
Not a bad spin on the dungeon master concept, but poorly executed. You can’t say the MC oozes confidence in the eyes of others if he’s been described to us as a beta MC until then. The transitions are not indicated and the writing (at least, in the early chapters) is confused syntax errors are common. At least, the grammer is relatively fine. It doesn’t hurt to read like in some other novel, but doesn’t entice to go curther either. If author has improved, he should goba k t’ his early chapters.
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