“I thought we were brothers, and this is how you treat me?”
Clutching his bloodied abdomen, John stared fiercely at the two figures before him.
And the dragger embedded in his stomach was none other than the symbol of their former friendship: the legendary gear [Apate’s Whisper].
“Just got a little lucky, and you think you’re so great?”
“Claiming to be blessed by the Goddess of Luck? I’d like to see where your Goddess is.”
“Hahahaha…”
Amidst the taunting laughter, John’s world gradually darkened.
…
[Ding, congratulations to the Host for becoming player number 001 in Apocalypse]
“Didn’t I die? What time is it now?”
[Ding, congratulations to the Host for acquiring the SSS talent Kiss of LUCK, randomly gaining a hundredfold Bonus!]
“A hundredfold Bonus?”
[Ding, the Host executes a normal attack, physical damage 5; based on talent evaluation, deals a total of 2000 points magic damage!]
[Ding, the Host obtains an iron dagger, quality common; based on talent evaluation, it upgrades to a Legendary dagger!]
[Ding, the Host obtains a magic scroll, quality rare; based on talent evaluation, it upgrades to a Divine scroll!]
“Good, this time, you all will pay for what you’ve done!”
5 stars cuz I love this story, When i pick up the keyboard and what to write a story with overpower MC, i find myself a little hesitated. This time, I want to write sth new, You may have SSS talent , ur level may high above other players, but the game is not just about power, level and talent. This time, I wish both I and my dear readers can enjoy the game world itself, and that's the only thing i can guarantee is: I do put a lot of effort in the world building, you may find this story's pace is a bit slower from my other work, but it's plot is the best of them. Hope you enjoy the reading and the upcoming chapters won't let you down! Beside, you can ask me everything under this review!
Very good, I'm enjoying the direction this story is taking and I hope the author doesn't let it fall apart. The plot so far is going very well, the characters are very good, it makes you angry with some, happy with others, and that's a good sign, once you empathize or antagonize the characters it's because the author has done a good job creating good characters in his story.
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you should write more about helena, but anyway thanks for the chapters -------------------------------------------------------------------------
Fairly rough at the beginning, but does a get a little better. Was a decent story to pass some time; however, the inconsistencies in story development is a bit of a turnoff.
Interesting world setting cuz the author said the game world wont merge with the original word but the game world do exist in the university? Stability of Updates is good, 3 chapters per day. Story Development, a bit slow but the plots are well arranged. Character Design: VERY GOOD!
why the MC cant just team up with Helena? With her talent and MC's talent, they will be overpower more soon at the early stage? At chapter 13 so far so good. but i really dont like lily
It been interesting so far, the author could make some corrections in some places. On that note, if you're a fan of an erotic, succubus, supernatural themed story, then 'My journey with a succubus' is definitely a book you should read. Go ahead and try it, you'll love it.
In general this a a really fun novel to read. My only real complaint is the lack of consistency on characters gender or names. The author continues to mix up pronouns even in chapter 200+ and will put the wrong names in for even main characters.
it will be greater if the MC's level upgrade more faster. Anyway, a good one to give it a try. I do love the Deception, please ,don't let him died!
So is this book complete or what?? Because it says complete but when I look at the chapters it says there r like 3-5 a week so I want to know if this book is still going because if it or then I MIGHT JUST MIGHT read it!!
Best of the best, hope the suggestions of mine do help you! cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers!
What an excellent story. And it's a mix of my favorite trope, rebirth, matched with my third favorite trope, VR Game dive. Definitely recommend and I'm absolutely adding this to my F5 List.
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All in all a great story with plenty of action and adventure. The ending unfortunately did seem kind of rushed though.