Forgotten Souls (JJK)

Let's do an author review here: -The story is mainly about Veilhem (Ashen One) and Makima (CSM) and their character development when they were throw at JJK world. -Because I'm writing about character in Dark Souls so the story had a lot of gore and blood, maybe a bit self-harm. -As of now, I'm still trying to get better at understanding these characters's mindset so it would hinder my update stability but I think it's completely fine to trade that to get a better writing quality. -The story is heavily leaned on the religious and their twisted love aspect so it isn't for anyone to read this but nonetheless, I'm quite enjoy weiting this piece of work.

bro just being a makima fanfic deserves a 5 stars (I'm not forced into this and I'm mentally stable )

The writing really just breathes life into my characters who seem so emotionally dead and I love how it is being portrayed so far. The plot is a tad confusing as of the first 12 chapters but I can see it developing really well. Traveling to wherever those flames take them, finding ways to slow or completely rid MC of the Hollowing curse, while going through worlds and building bonds to restore one's humanity. Might not even be what the Author is going for but the possible outcomes are exciting. Great story and great writing. Keep up the good work

could use a bit of editing due to a couple of typos but I'd say pretty good story characters fit their manga and anime counter parts and good story arc progression. 8 out of 10

never thought i would see combination like this. looking forward B)

Honestly it’s interesting and I’m looking forward to more

I just realized that I didn't even post a review. This story really deserves a lot more but it doesn't work because of the webnovel system where you have to post daily or at least once a week. But this story is really amazing the relationship with Makima is so romantic with ups and downs and Makima is like in the manga so the author respects her character well

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Very interesting relationship looking forward to more

Glad to see more dark souls fics. I’m looking forward to more of this.

Made the character extremely disappointing so easily manipulated

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I don't often read multiple mc fanfics. But this one in particular was interesting. The writing style is pretty good and I quite liked the first chapter. I am not a huge fan of makima, however the plot was quite interesting. Overall, I'd give it a four. Definitely something to read if you're into JJK.