An otherworldly cultivator finds himself in the body of a young Naruto, shortly after he finishes his academy days.
With only fragmented memories of this new world, he finds himself in. The cultivator will make full use of his old knowledge to not only survive but reach new heights.
Everyone who tries to get in his way will soon find how ruthless this old soul can be.
A.N - Please read this:
- The characters In the story will be a bit older than in canon. They will start at fifteen after graduating from the academy and will be around eighteen after the Shippuden time skip.
- There will be Harem. I'm not sure how big yet, but probably not very big.
- There will be a lot of violence and blood, so be warned.
- There will be some occasional smut scene later on in the story.
- During the beginning, the story is going to follow canon events quite closely, but this will change more and more as the story progresses and Naruto's actions and decisions start to have consequences.
The upload rate is currently at 6 chapters per week, I may increase it in the future if I have more time. I do not have specific days or times for the uploads because my full-time job has an erratic schedule so I upload whenever I have the time. But you can expect 6 new chapters by the end of the week. Sorry for the inconvenience, I hope my readers understand.
Honesty, it isn't bad if you just ignore the fact that the entire fic is basically the OG Naruto storyline with a calm MC who shows one or two moves from his previous world every 20 chapters later. Still, his overall strength is somehow equal to the OG Naruto even now. So, I'll just drop it instead of waiting for this to get better.
This story is just straight up bad, everything is copy and pasted from the anime with slight changes and the mc is supposed to be from the murim with an unparalleled cultivation technique and yet nothings changing from the canon 73 chapters in.
Read up to current chapter. Its just overall pretty boring. They skip over any and all training that could show the diff between power structures. But the thing I dislike the most is that I am left expecting something more that will never come. He is supposed to ge a cultivator yet is messing around with kids his age. He has no pride that cultivators usually have and he seems like he was just kind of a random cultivator from his world. Also, idk if this is for author to keep plot aligned with OG plot or what but it is kind of annoying waiting for new chapters just to be disappointed time and time again. He just lets sasuke go and do whatever emo shit he wants under the guise of “ill mind my own business” yet he ends up dragged into his bullshit in the end anyways. He puts up with kakashe basically teaching him jack shit as well. Had so much potential but overall just a wasted opportunity. And dont even get me started on the forced bs with mc and ino cause author gotta have a harem tag.
Yo, there's so much hate here y'all should learned tto appreciate a well written stor, like this fic here. And ffs stop complaining its not even that bad, y'all just nitpicking every little things that aint even relevant to the progression of the plot.
Sadly a bust at chapter 76 it is a 1 to 1 rewriting of Naruto. The only real difference is that naruto has a other personality but all in all makes all the exact same decisions as in the original just far more unbelievable (half the time I think what an as pull).
Slow pace but still an enyoble story that make me want to come back for more. Sometimes stick a bit to close to orginal story but as we get further in we get some big changes. Also I prefer this Naruto over the original one
The novel is written well, even the story is mostly same with original naruto i still convince myself to read as to remind me the good old days naruto, but in this novel that irk me the most is the slow pace, the short arc can take 20+ chp while on other fanfic only take 3-4 chp and the long arc is take almost damn 100 chp, i wonder when the author will finish this fanfic or just drop it in the middle.
Another missed opportunity, 120 chapters and the only thing different from the anime and dialogue and some naruto techniques, it had potential but the author can't move far from the canon.
I’ve made it to ch 50… it’s still the same story as the original. Genin exam with the same interactions (sand siblings, hokage grandson) only difference is the dialogue
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Story had a very good potential but the writer could not fully utelise it
Got mixed feeling about this story. On one hand we get a calm and mature Naruto without any future extra knowledge about this world but on the other one we still get the same story that we all know. The path that mc takes is a bit different, but it still reaches the same destination.
The story is very bland. We don't know anything about the main character's past life or abilities, only that he was in Murim and that the author nerfs him. The main character has overpowered tools at his disposal, but we see nothing of their impact. His personality is also quite boring. 😴
Overall a good start and I liked the story concept but it is a slow pace story....
Nice start.