it was a pretty good story it ended quickly which is the only thing i didnt like i wanted the story to last more because i liked it and since it ended i was a little sad but i still liked this storyy it was one of my favourites and not only because of the spicee at the end but also because actual story the author wrote was good
4 months ago
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Daoistjp8aCT
I absolutely loved it. More background needed on y/n, however the author did a great job at the descriptions. Author needs to proof read for grammar mistakes; there was 2-3 that I found while reading, however it was easy to understand what they met. But overall it was enjoyable to read.
it was a pretty good story it ended quickly which is the only thing i didnt like i wanted the story to last more because i liked it and since it ended i was a little sad but i still liked this storyy it was one of my favourites and not only because of the spicee at the end but also because actual story the author wrote was good
I absolutely loved it. More background needed on y/n, however the author did a great job at the descriptions. Author needs to proof read for grammar mistakes; there was 2-3 that I found while reading, however it was easy to understand what they met. But overall it was enjoyable to read.