MMA System: I Will Be Pound For Pound Goat

IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT'S TIME!!!! Okay , I uploaded the novel and deleted it so I can enter a contest. It only had 9 chapters. so this novel will be a mixture of sports and a slice of life to show Damon's personal life and professional life, family, fame, and career. another thing I wanted to clarify was the timeline, the timeline is mushed up, just take it as alternate earth, everything else is the same, just that I may or may not bring in retired fighters as active fighters. The system won't be an absolute cheat. He won't just learn moves and skills just by knowing the knowledge. He must put effort into training and master them. And now IIIIIIITS TIME For ....... Just read.

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The novel writing at the beginning is so trash that, it makes one to spit on it and then just ignore it. WTF!! Do you even understand their situation? They are a homeless mother and son duo, who went through abuse and shit... and you still keep writing words like "a smile playing on her face" "Her eyes sparkled with amusement" "Protecting him so that he does know about their harsh reality" WTF! Are these bullshit! why has no one commented on those bullshit! And how the fuck did he even do all those exercise, he eat shit like nothing, got fapped by a random guy in the back yard, has a weak body yet he somehow done all the exercise, do you even read what you are writing. trash fk this is trash.

Seems like this could be really good! Hope you can keep it going 😁

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Perfect 👌 the only problem that there is not enough chapters, the fight scenes are 🔥 and the reactions on everything also goateed 🔥🔥 pls can you have 3 chapters a day not 2 and don’t drop this or I will drop your head

Eh, it's alright. I've only read 33 chapters out of the current 473 so this might not be too early for a review from my side but the writing just isn't of high quality, it's an interesting premise though and it isn't done poorly but not very well either. Anyway I just tried to fill the word count with all of this to say: Sorry, but Jon Jones exists, there is simply nothing you can do.

Mano a história e legal mais a partes de lutas meu deus parece que so o mc evoluiu nos treinos e na lutas nao so isso os adversários que o mc luta parece tudo burros o mc literalmente usa tod hora o chute baixo e os cara nao se defende e ainda els deixa o mc chutar eles meu deus mais quando o adversário dele usa os mesmo golpe o mc consegue se adaptar mano qual e a lógica a história e boa mais tem que melhorar na partes da lutas

Keep up the good work👍. I really love the idea of the novel and I think you can even do boxing matches like the YouTubers

Great novel but I’ll never unlock chapters absolutely wild to spend that kind of money when great books on kindle are cheaper. If you want money put it on kindle.

A hidden Gem, It is basically like Baki and Kengan Ashura but more balanced and grounded to reality, the pace is amazing and the system isn't much of a golden finger, at least compared to most systems as he needs the grit and will to win and survive the next fight. there are ups and downs in his match ups, giving you the pump and the interaction are life like, the emersion is so great that this book made me buy coins to unlock all of the chapters.

This is the first time I'm commenting since I started reading on this app that's shows how much I enjoy this keep up the work👏👏