Follow Ezekiel's story as he finds himself being amongst the 100 as they are dropped Into a world ridden with danger and death looming at every corner.
But luckily for Ezekiel he isn't sent with only the clothes on his back in this world but gifted a variant of one of the most powerful abilities or system as others might call it, The Gamer.
[—Note: This will be an AU, with new threats, grounders being stronger then their canon counterparts and new elements in the mix without jeopardizing the whole 100 Series to make the world more difficult for the MC and everyone in general and to keep in interesting so the MC doesn't steamroll this entire world and so that I can tell a story.]
[—Tags: Kingdom Building, Chaotic Neutral MC, Small amount of darkness, Smut here and there and the occasional bullshittery.]
[Side-Note: The MC will not be a perfect individual, he will not be all-knowing and a know it all and will make mistakes and decisions that lack any good judgement at first, he is selfish and does most of what he does for the benefit of himself first and is untrustful at first of everyone due to his past, hopefully throughout the story I will be able to showcase a little complex personality where he grows as a person by understanding his feelings and logical thoughts in a way that his entire persona doesn't break from them mashing and disrupting each other.]
The idea is great. The setting is novel enough to catch anyone's eye. The writing is also good. Sadly, that's all this fic has in terms of hooks. It's worth a try, but be warned that the MC is a teenager given power. He's edge given form and all good things that happen in the story are because of him. Of course, any time something bad happens has nothing to do with the MC and the Teen Chad McEdge is always there to sav- observe, he won't save, cause morals are for those of lesser edge. He also starts liking a girl, but obiously won't love. Love is not for Chad MC's.
Love it, there aren’t a lot of 100 fics out there we need good content like this.
10/10 till chapter 27 author doesn't look at reviews and this is awful after that cmon how you let it fall that bad
this fic started off strong but then the mc becomes super indecisive allowing betrayals against him not punishing the perpetrators and continually allowing enemies to get the better of him. even though he supposedly has high intelligence and powers.and the way he just milks character to death that he should of killed off already for drawn out boring drama. got soo annoying that i had to drop the story.
After chapter 50 it becomes trash because MC becomes a useless simp with a spine .
Everything the protagonist needs to survive is given to him at the beginning, it would have been better if it was continuous. Wouldn't it be better to give him a technical map where he finds capsules with those weapons as the story progresses?
I don't care anymore, the MC sucks. He has the power to manipulate plants and only uses it in secret, he fears being ostracized because he has powers but when he becomes inseparable from the settlement as all but a king he still won't use his powers. Now he faces a strong and more numerous army and he still doesn't use his powers. And this is only one complaint that every active reader has.
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crack fic. Basically MC got a bunch of skills and abilities from a Gacha, and surprise surprise he got S+ for an ability and a bunch of A+ rewards. Author clearly have no idea how Gacha works. Anyways the main flaw of this fic is that MC is too overpowered from the beginning and probably could bulldozed every problem by chapter 5.
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Loving the story so far finally a story about The 100 where the MC is actually a competent leader keep it coming Author.
It's not good anymore I take back my earlier review [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
Author is scared to drift off from the plot.
The novel started off good but overall after chapter 30ish it went downhill fast
honestly started out good but then finn came along and Clark and raven and the story started going down hill very fast honestly I don't remember where it started but if you want to check it I think it was around chapter 60 more or less and you can see how the author starts destroying the fic.