Rebirth with Ultimate Primordial system
"Ding! Ultimate Primordial System is here"
Karn a b.tech student from MANIT transmigrated to Indu's start, where aura warriors avail. And with it's awakening a powerful being sealed far away in universe awake,
Why?
Why he said "Finally, now revenge can be done"
what is the mystery behind the Karn and how can he survive in this world with system.
"Hello guys, I am an new Indian writer, mixing the concept of ancient Ramayana and Mahabharat into this novel and bacnkground of ancient Bharat. Hope to see your support with collections and power stones and if you have any suggestion and doubt feel free to comment it. And believe at the end of chapter 100 there will be major change in novel and you will like it"
https://discord.gg/wPdChBdD and this is the discord group for Indian Novel Writers
full support for Indian authors here. thank you for story. Just note here, Bro maybe you can take advantage of ChatGPT for writing chapters.
before reading I wanna know will you complete the story or you gonna stop it midway like other fanfics on webnovel.????
Please fix ur grammar and also format the paragraphs better. Stop using brackets as a sign of scene change it’s very confusing
While the early chapters shine with fresh energy and engaging character development, the middle section suffers from pacing issues. The side characters, particularly the mentor figure and rival, add depth to an otherwise standard plot. Despite its flaws, the story maintains enough momentum to keep readers invested, even if it doesn't revolutionize the genre. Best suited for fans of cultivation fantasies.
author, the storyline is good, but the way you describe things or the grammar is off and feels too advanced with unnecessary words
kinda love these types of novels and the only thing if you can try to correct is that the system notification like instead of writing "system" try to write like [ System] this as this makes the text a little bit system like you know what I mean