[Linguistics Skill: Lv0 (7/10)]
[Apothecary Skill: Lv1 (15/100)]
[Knight Breathing Skill: Lv2 (36/200)]
[Knight Breathing Skill Experience Point +1]
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In the year 3077 of the Berta calendar, during the era of confusion before wizards had reached the throne, he brought them 'Straight A Student Panel.' He stepped into the sorcerer world, perfected sorcerer knowledge, like a bright moon dispelling the mists of the era.
He was Ivan Marichardon, a pioneer of knowledge, he blazed trails for the way of the sorcerer.
Review at chapter 59. So far, I am hooked on this story. Wish I had another few hundred chapters to binge. System used is simplified compared to most stories but that actually enhances this story and keeps the focus on world building and the MC.
Story is good but its a harem.. he already has 3 wives at 460+ another will be added probably.. will have 1 wife per 100 chapter if this goes on.. such a good story ruined for me..
I like sorcerer/mage books a lot and this one scratches that itch. Pacing is good, characters are good, world building is solid. I especially like how the system is just information of one’s self rather than a shop/quest/gacha abomination. Will be keeping up with this.
The story is great and flows beautifully… the MC is careful and pace slowly like a true Magus… hope it will get more updates
love this book can't wait for more. interesting approach with the insect controlling.
Love this story. The world building and characters are a level above most stories on this site.
Chapters read: 126 MC transmirates into the body of Ivan Marichadon, the 3rd son of a fallen nobility. He unlocks his golden finger (can't forget that), which is the "sit still, look pretty" type (silent type and beautiful). Due to having this golden finger, MC is hard-working, studious, dedicated and persistent. However, he seems to be surrounded by girls who are full of themselves, acting all high and mighty, coquettish and pouting when he doesn't give him the attention they want (at least this is how I saw his female leads to be, and yes, it's a harem). But why such a low review?? I thought the story was just okay. It's a bit different from the other magic/sorcery stories I've read, but it didn't captivate me. Why did I read so many chapters? It was Limited Free reading and a recommendation for my daily Fast Pass lol Maybe you'll enjoy the story, so give it a go.
it was good at the beginning but soon degraded to crude translation .
this has good potential I can tell English isn't your first Language but everything takes time. I'd recommend grammarly to help you find any mistakes you might make. also I'd recommend that when your English is better go over and edit any mistakes so your story can go farther and get more people to love it.
would have been a great story following the lines of greats like warlock of the magus world, but with a more human touch to the story. however, the above is only true when the translation quality is good. past chapter 300-400 or so, it becomes as bad as mtl, with inconsistent names and disjointed sentences everywhere. A good story with potential for greatness, but handicapped by webnovel use of a shitty TL or using MTL masquerading as human TL
So, after all that buildup about the super master plan to become a level 4 sorcerer, everything's done in the background ?? I expected better bro..
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Biggest issue right now: Needs major editing and grammar corrections. Needs an editor to keep up with the translator. Essentially Translation speed is very good, but lots of minor errors are left behind. Some major things at the beginning which may turn way potential readers. Pros: Overall it’s a good start. While we haven’t yet reached the level of strength and fame, MC shows in the synopsis, it’s a good start in setting up character and world building.
Reveal Spoiler
Initially the mc is depicted as hard working and the rewards are about what he deserves. However, eventually it’s like the author got bored of justifying why the mc should get thing so he just starts shoving bonuses down the mcs throat faster then he can swallow. A perfect example of this is that right after learning a technique that needs rare raw materials a friend appears and guides him to get the perfect material in no time all. It might have even been the same chapter. It’s just lazy writing. Also, a bunch of the time it feels more like reading a summary of a novel than reading an actual novel. I appreciate that some things take awhile and we don’t need to read about everything but as we go the author uses times skips more and more while providing less and less detail.