Haikyuu : The Unstoppable Force
Stepping into the world of Haikyuu, Akira finds himself as a international student who moved to Miyagi Prefecture and stumbled upon a super workout system.
With every bit of training, he grows stronger!
Push-ups (100/100): Spike power +0.1
Long-distance running (5000/5000): Endurance +0.1
...and so on!
Kageyama Tobio: "I really don’t want to face Akira on the court. It’s downright demoralizing!"
Hinata Shoyo: "Akira is the goal I’ll spend my whole life chasing!"
Tetsurō Kuroo: "Our Nekoma’s defense is nearly flawless, yet even it can’t stop Akira’s strongest attack."
Oikawa Tooru: "I despise geniuses the most! Especially a genius like Akira, who works relentlessly hard!"
(For young people unfamiliar with volleyball—this is your chance to dive in!)
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Here's the cliched NOTE : English is my 3rd language so I'm not proficient in that , so if there are any mistakes please point it out to me
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Great start and pacing of the story.This app really needs more Haikyuu fanfics so i really hope this continues. Overall highly recommended to those who see this review.
A good fanfic, the chapter size is also good, please author, continue writing this fanfic. I wish you luck regarding the character portrayal, which will be in this review
it's good just hate the personality of mc as he seems to know everyone and giving tips, And then him not being self centered already seems to waste the character development, it makes the story less interesting, And very predictable.
The story and the fanfic is good, but the writing quality needs a bit more changing, it feels way too cringy reading it, just like a chinese fanfic, I recommend you use ai to make it more readable, but overall a great fanfic
A great story. There are few Haikyuu stories and this is definitely one of the best. I hope it continues. I also like the way the romantic development. Not so focused on it, but not leaving it aside either. Natural. The way he interacts with the characters is also cool. He could be a little more relaxed, though. Well, that's it. 5 STARS.
This is one of the best sport fanfic, i Hope more ppl will see it bc 45 place on rankings when 3/4 leaderboard are trash is a joke ..
This is the most addictive haikyuu fanfic, if you are like me searching for haikyuu fanfic with op mc then this is for you, the update stability is great and the length of each chapter is also big, the mc's system and growth are also pretty satisfying, great work, keep on updating, need more ....
Writing Quality: 3 Stars MTL Writing Quality. Updates: 5 Stars Not enough chapters to really evaluate the Stability of Updates.... Story Development: 2 Stars Bad, the Story Development is too rushed there are a lot of time skips in 3 chapters. Character Design: 1 Star I feel like all the characters are singular, simple and predictable. World Background: 5 Stars Well, it is the Haikyuu World. It is well constructed so nothing much to say about it.
Oh wow.. I really like this story! Because most other Haikyuu fanfics follow the original storyline too much, this is the first time I've found one that's arrggghh. [img=In your face]
Nice story, concept, just don't linger too much in one match using multiple chapter, well it's not a problem if you release multiple chapter a day but if you release a single chapter a day that comes to notice that you are taking too much time in one match (well they are important matches but max 4-5). Man it's really boring waiting for next part of chapter of match it's dimnishes my interest
I'm kinda torn, cuz i read the "about volleyball" stuff and I know this shts gonna be great, but as i said im torn, between reading this now, because i love sports fanfic, or letting this sht marinate, but hey have a five-r.
The MC's personality reminds me of a Chinese MC, kind of disgusting, not because it's too much, I read a lot of MTL and I'm used to it, but when I leave Chinese sites and go to sites like webnovel and fanfiction, I try to avoid things like that, I read up to chapter 4, does anyone know if the MC is still the same?
The grammer is horrendous, seriously its barely readable. Just use gpt, even AI is better than this
grammarly.
i hope you dont stop updating this fanfic, its super good