Naruto: The Shattered Eyes

This is Honestly such a banger that, I almost wept. The work is so good that they should be paid for gracing us with such god-tier work.

This story is annoying as fuck. Mostly because of just how erattic MC's power level seems to be. In one scene, he's walking around Suna as if he's stronger than all the shinobi there and could get away with them easily. In another scene, he's running away from his Sensei (a Jounin), like a little bitch. That's not even mentioning how he goes around killing civilians (innocent men, women and children) without any romarse or a second thought just because he wanted some more chakra. Finally, we get to MC's technique. He can apparently see incredibly far away and in almost invisible to other people's chakra sense. And this ability lasts as long as the author requires it of him. And then 'plot' happens and MC has suddenly forgotten or neglected to use his technique and finds himself facing enemy shinobi. This fic is pretty decent but shit like this makes it incredibly frustrating to read.

It's a good story, and very entertaining to read. But also rather frustrating because his own actions come back to bite him. Sometimes I have to wonder if he's a genius or a fool. Like, trading his fire technique for better fire jutsu. He just became a chunin and could've just learned better ones anyway. Now everyone and their grandma not only knows his signature technique, but uses it better than him. Or how he just stood around doing nothing, letting Danzo kill Fugaku and get stronger. Despite showing he could interfere from dozens of miles away like last time. I dunno man. It's a great story, but the MC's had 12 years, has triple eye hacks and it feels like he's STILL trying to find his bearings, lol. You can just think of this as me venting. Still like your story, and keep up the good work.

Love it so far can't wait for more, want to know if this is a original fanfic if not could you let me know the source so I can beige it. If not that ok to just don't drop it if it's your original I really want to know how everything plays out

Pretty fun story to read. It read smoothly and I don't remember any errors. I like the dojutsu you created for the MC. This story just obliterated canon and it's awesome. I enjoy how MC is chaotic neutral but also intelligent.

This story is awesome cant wait for more

I really liked it honestly post more and if anyone can recommend me noromance fan fiction with a villain like mc it would be nice and if possible noharem because I am not able to find quality work like thiss every story I see it have harem and romance I am tired of it😀

Definitely one of the best Naruto fanfic in this platform, unique ability with an MC with IQ higher than room temperature is so rare these days. though there's still some incongruity such as the leap in logic for some plot devices but overall it is a very enjoyable read

Webnovel should Sign a contract for this fic. Fast paced No Harem No Romance Netural MC Smart MC - Smart in many sense, like Academic Smart, Emotionally Intelligent and is able to see himself critically to stop his arrogance and overconfidence. . Honestly Author did a Great Job with the Fic.. He promised and he Delivered. . I purposely didn't mention his powers and such, you just need to make it past 2nd chapter pacing gets better after that....

honestly the author is cooking here lowkey... the Main Charactere has an actual impact on the story as we watch it change and tho not many interactions with the cast we will see as i said the author is cooking something let him cook

Loving this so far, a different take on Naruto from the usual fanfic troops. Really liking the progress so far, keep up the good work Author. Much intrigued to see how far the MC goes and when will he meet his sensei officially. All the best Author !!!

Ohhh I just love his ability it makes me very happy

Everything is perfect, except for a few plot holes at the start. But still, great quality, frequent updates, etc.

This was a really fun read! Looking forward to more