Naruto: The Shattered Eyes

This is Honestly such a banger that, I almost wept. The work is so good that they should be paid for gracing us with such god-tier work.

Love it so far can't wait for more, want to know if this is a original fanfic if not could you let me know the source so I can beige it. If not that ok to just don't drop it if it's your original I really want to know how everything plays out

This is a pretty exceptional story, I don’t really have any major complaints about it, just minor ones that don’t detract from my enjoyment. I like the Dōjutsu, the protagonist is likeable, his actions have been smart and his morality being Chaotic Neutral is great to see since I love Neutral characters. The only real criticism I have would be that his development in a certain Kinjutsu should’ve been expanded upon by showing us his struggles and thought process in developing, it’s a-bit hard to believe even with his resources that he can accomplish that when he has such a poor talent in everything else. His apprenticeship was also hard to believe but I like it and your direction. Add in that it’s not impossible for it to happen and I'm fine with it, that’s all the constructive criticism I’ve got. Keep up the fantastic work, and I’m looking forward to the future of your story!

This story is awesome cant wait for more

honestly the author is cooking here lowkey... the Main Charactere has an actual impact on the story as we watch it change and tho not many interactions with the cast we will see as i said the author is cooking something let him cook

Pretty fun story to read. It read smoothly and I don't remember any errors. I like the dojutsu you created for the MC. This story just obliterated canon and it's awesome. I enjoy how MC is chaotic neutral but also intelligent.

I really like the concept of the story and how its written, the mc, the pacing, the plot besides Danzo.

It's a good story, and very entertaining to read. But also rather frustrating because his own actions come back to bite him. Sometimes I have to wonder if he's a genius or a fool. Like, trading his fire technique for better fire jutsu. He just became a chunin and could've just learned better ones anyway. Now everyone and their grandma not only knows his signature technique, but uses it better than him. Or how he just stood around doing nothing, letting Danzo kill Fugaku and get stronger. Despite showing he could interfere from dozens of miles away like last time. I dunno man. It's a great story, but the MC's had 12 years, has triple eye hacks and it feels like he's STILL trying to find his bearings, lol. You can just think of this as me venting. Still like your story, and keep up the good work.

Loving this so far, a different take on Naruto from the usual fanfic troops. Really liking the progress so far, keep up the good work Author. Much intrigued to see how far the MC goes and when will he meet his sensei officially. All the best Author !!!

Ohhh I just love his ability it makes me very happy

Everything is perfect, except for a few plot holes at the start. But still, great quality, frequent updates, etc.

Definitely one of the best Naruto fanfic in this platform, unique ability with an MC with IQ higher than room temperature is so rare these days. though there's still some incongruity such as the leap in logic for some plot devices but overall it is a very enjoyable read

The author did a great job—definitely one of the best Naruto fanfics, in my opinion.

I challenge anyone to name a better naruto fic. Well-written, Plot, Feels like a naruto fic. Not a canon following theft. Absolutely marvelous.