After surviving a school shooting, a young victim wakes up in the world of *Twilight* with a new body and powers beyond understanding. As they adjust to this strange place, they must face their past and the dangers that come with their new abilities.
p.s: don't read if you don't have any patience for a newcomer.
warning: slow plot
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Tanto potencial desperdiçado, não tem nenhum desenvolvimento de personagem, a história é extremamente confusa com coisas aleatórias jogadas de lado sinceramente decepcionante
While it is very good as a god should he not possess a Godly body attributes such as super strength etc ? Technically as the God of the Sky he could have a home in the sky but it would require him to learn to build a home worthy of a God. I believe he has vast potential with his divinities and I hope he pushes them to the limit while being creative on ways to use them. Overall however fantastic job may Jaxon & Leah remain together for eternity.
I haven’t really read the book yet just read the synopsis and saw the part “after surviving a school shooting a young victim wakes up in the world of Twilight” I think he just died, got shot went unconscious apparently in twilight now, yeah probably died { Don’t mind the review it just wouldn’t let me post otherwise}
This is an amazing book I really hope you make more
Nice fic, interesting powers too. wanting for extra chaps please author😭 . .
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The grammar is great, and the story premise is good. The introduction felt a bit shaky, but Jaxon feels like a person with his own independent thoughts thankfully. No angst/unnecessary, so that's already great.
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Unique setting for twilight, although Canon just started, I'm eager for more. Also, kinda odd and new seeing people want a Bella romance. . . .. .
I like the MC interactions with Leah and her family. They sound so genuine and funny. I wish to see more of Seth, bro got enough personality to carry the original twilight series😂😂😂 I wonder if the romance will be as straightforward as it looks with Leah, or maybe someone else. None did a Bella as far as I remember, and here she seems to be his Ex.
Eager for more! . . . . .
Ok, first impression from reading the first 10 chapters, it is thankfully not cringy. I like his personality, he actually feels like a person who was thrust into twilight and has that: "Not my business, not my occupation, not my problem" mindset regarding the plot, which is something I respect.