Twilight: Gods among us

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Tanto potencial desperdiçado, não tem nenhum desenvolvimento de personagem, a história é extremamente confusa com coisas aleatórias jogadas de lado sinceramente decepcionante

While it is very good as a god should he not possess a Godly body attributes such as super strength etc ? Technically as the God of the Sky he could have a home in the sky but it would require him to learn to build a home worthy of a God. I believe he has vast potential with his divinities and I hope he pushes them to the limit while being creative on ways to use them. Overall however fantastic job may Jaxon & Leah remain together for eternity.

I haven’t really read the book yet just read the synopsis and saw the part “after surviving a school shooting a young victim wakes up in the world of Twilight” I think he just died, got shot went unconscious apparently in twilight now, yeah probably died { Don’t mind the review it just wouldn’t let me post otherwise}

The grammar is great, and the story premise is good. The introduction felt a bit shaky, but Jaxon feels like a person with his own independent thoughts thankfully. No angst/unnecessary, so that's already great.

This is an amazing book I really hope you make more

For a noob writer , you did amazing . However i do wish you spend less time on the music . But that’s just my opinion. The only thing you need to work on, is your update stability. I would have gave you 2 stars on that rating . But it seems like your pretty young and living with your mom. That’s what it seems. So we all know how things goes when you’re that young.

Eagerly awaiting for more from you, author👍 . . . .

Nice fic, interesting powers too. wanting for extra chaps please author😭 . .

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Unique setting for twilight, although Canon just started, I'm eager for more. Also, kinda odd and new seeing people want a Bella romance. . . .. .