I am Sam witwicky(SI)

AUTHOR DO NOT QUIT THIS NOVEL WHEN YOU START..DO NOT BE A DUMB BxAxSxTxAxRxD like ALL THE AUTHOR THAT HAVE written TRANSFORMERS STORIES AND DO NOT FINISH,, author does not waste my time by not finishing this novel.,, SAM NEED TO BECOME RICH, NOT POOR AND SAM BECOME A PRIME OR GET A SYSTEM Thank you AND DO not quit AUTHOR

Well, I posted a one star review earlier with some criticism on much of the bullshits and Sam being able to create technology that honestly requires way more intelligence than I believe he truly has. That shit nears level twelve intellect so I keep that point here. Beyond that, I followed the author's advice and kept reading. Not too bad considering everything else, there are enough good bits that can make you enjoy what's happening, but Sam's abilities really don't match the technological level of the cybertronians so there's still a lot of bullshit all the way to chapter 15. But if you can ignore all that it's readable, and you can get some enjoyment out of it. For the author, honestly, it would be better if you could build up his abilities from low to high gradually instead of coming up with all the things you did. Also, I don't think there is, but if so, you should add an AU warning at the description cause this can irk many readers, I included. That's all, good work and keep on doing your best, I hope your writing skills can grow as you publish more chapters.

AUTHOR if you do another Transformer novel why not.. novel name is TRANSFORMERS IN MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE they fight the reapers and help the heroes of Mass Effect. REINCARNATED MC GET THE ALLSPARK AND CREATED TRANSFORMERS WORLD AND EMPIRE,, we do need more Transformers novels in here.

I AM A TRANSFORMERS FAN..THIS IS GOLD..THIS NOVLE HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR MULTIVERSE TRANSFORMERS -DC-MARVLE-ANIMES-GAMES WORLDS..THIS IS EPIC START

Did you just rewrite perfection, WHY what went through your head to make you rewrite this!!

Author said he was rewriting it but this is just slightly better than the original. The Mc isn't changing anything from the cannon besides fixing bee's voice... Bro have a army of Iron man suits and never used it just because the author don't wanna change the cannon 👎

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Heavy AI usage, at the point you usually read the same thing twice on every chapter, or every chapter a lot of words are wasted of Sam, Jarvis or Bee thanking each other for any reason. Probably some AI thing, but is still readable. As we don't have any good transformers fic, you can use this one to pass some time.

Seria legal ver ele viajar a outras realidades como Marvel MCU, ou algo do gênero. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

"...alex who loved transformers is reincarnated as sam witwicky in the transformers bayverse universe with a few wishes..."

I'm tired of waiting to re-upload 3 times, the author will probably continue to do so, so good luck and good nerves to the readers[img=Cries]

Wish fulfilment and amateur writing. so many plot holes and so unrealistic moments even with all those gifts just made me bored with the story progress thats all for my review.

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