Cherubim System
Author: Regi_Nald
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Waking up to a city under siege, Kodesh, a boy of 16 years with no mystical powers fights against all odds to escape the war torn city and somehow stumbles upon a mysterious and deadly system. The system eventually opened his spiritual eyes to more powerful forces of the spiritual realm ruling the physical world. Together with a band of misfits, they try to save the world from the apocalyptic dangers lurking in the shadows of both the physical and the spirit. But before striving to save the world, he has to first save himself from overpowered dark entities sedulously attempting to possess his body.
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i love your beginning, a nice introduction. your book really piqued my interest in the very beginning but I'm gonna complain about long paragraphs. otherwise, your work shows the effort put into it.
I like how it starts, and the way it unfolds so far is really good. I hope it continues at this pace. I'm excited to see Kodach's growth.
Nice plot, though I advise reducing the redundancy of words in some places. Grammar should be taken care of. Otherwise, good style of writing and narration. Good job!
Really good writing technique. But it took me like 50 yrs to get passed chapter 1 because your huge words "cacophony" and "onerous" So my only problem is huge grammar. some of us aren't walking vocabularies. Good job 🍊
a very good introduction to the book and very thrilling scenes. please keep updating author
A great introduction to a compelling story. I know it will only get better from hereafter. I’m hooked
It is a nice read. the flow of story is very engaging, and the author is really pushing boundaries in the story 😂 I like the wordplay, too. but it needs further polishing for easier reading flow. please, keep on weaving this tale.
I can't wait to read more! keep it upppppp!