Harry Potter: I Cast

The description on its own deserves 5 stars I haven’t even started reading it yet………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

I’m the author so obviously this is a mandatory five stars, now onto the actual book. This book has many things like a plot, characters, hopeful character development, villains, fights and other book related things. If you don’t like this just know I will Cast Instant Brazilian Wax on each and every one of you. Now go read and I hope you enjoy it.

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5 stars cause this is first fanfic/story that Ihave seen that uses these most powerful spells :)

I CAST 'CONSTANTLY TWITCHING LEFT EYE!!' ..................I CAST 'KIDNEY STONE!!'............I CAST 'COMMON COLD!!'...............................................................................................................................................

Well, the character scenes had no real meaning. Disappointed with this book 🫠

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this is tiring to read, the author is trying to lengthen the chapter by repeating the same sentence with a different word but still the same meaning,seriously the amount of filler in each chapter is a lot

5 stars because why not right? ...........................

You got me at Testicular Tortion... Can't wait till he Cast FIST

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Every single chapter is filled with useless filler that doesn't progress the story and exist just to lengthen the chapters, 20 chapters in and nothing happened, no story development and no real progression Overall the story is boring, the amount of filler makes it unreadable and the OC don't do anything idk why author wasted 15 chapters before he even got to Hogwarts if this was some Chinese fanfic with 1000+ chapters it would be fine but with the current updating stability idk if the story will ever be finished

This is a beautiful start to a fascinating take on Harry Potter. It's well written and the characters are developed incredibly well; while also placing them seamlessly into the world of Harry Potter. The small additions and minor tweaks to the world give the story a much more magical feel than you'd find in other stories. Overall, compared with other fan fictions here, this one is amazing. If anything subtracts from the story, it would be that the author was too good. Usually this isn't much of an issue in stories like this because the author doesn't manage to draw their reader enough into their story. From a literary standpoint, the beginning of the story was harsh. The tone and mood was drastic to say the least. You started with an overall comedic and easy flowing overtone, building a relationship between two childhood friends; and then suddenly twisted it to an overall disgust. The writing and ploy was excellent, however it only resulted in creating negative emotions for a reader. Was it a good plot device that separated the two friends, while also displaying his seer abilities and magical prowess? Yep. Did it also turn off and leave a negative feeling for the reader at the very beginning of the story? Yep again. Again, usually this isn't something that matters in works like this because the author isn't a good author. But in this case, Id really recommend thinking about tone and mood, especially at the very beginning of a story. Still, a diamond of a story. Hope to see it advance into a full one.