the system is kinda bs. power system unclear. character progression too unnatural.
a month ago
2
Saku123_Naru123
nice, story about sunagakure. prety cool.
its puppet and heal skill .
got level system.
funy and tranlate is good enough
need more chapter
to review again
maybe after you post 200+[img=faceslap]
2 months ago
2
MIA_Transl9
Is this a translation?
Thanks
X
a month ago
1
Rose_Pink_8478
Mendaki gunung lewati lembah
Sungai mengalir indah ke samudra
Bersama teman bertualang
Tempat yang baru blum pernah terjamah
Suasana yang ramai di tengah kota
Selalu waspadalah kalau berjalan
Siap menolong orang di mana saja
Informasi penting disajikan secara kronologis
Gozaru gozaru itulah asalnya
Pembela kebenaran dan keadilan
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Di dahan pohon dia mulai beraksi
Menjaga anak-anak bermain di taman
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Bunga-bunga indah terbang ke awan
Membawa hati kita jadi gembira
Gozaru gozaru itulah asalnya
Pembela kebenaran dan keadilan
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2 months ago
1
DZeref887
I don't like MCs who interfere too much in other people's household affairs
11 days ago
0
earth_19998
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord
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Top tear Naruto fic!! The characters, the story progression, especially the comedy amidst the somewhat bleak ninja setting of Suna- all are top notch!! Can’t wait for more chapters!!
2 months ago
0
Rose_Pink_4377
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2 months ago
0
RIZKI_SEPTIANI
for free... its good maybe?
genre :
Comedy
System
Action
Grind?
Con:
its to few, inedmore?
Will be coming back! Thank you so much.”
Will be coming back! Thank you so much.”
2 months ago
0
kikicrmkia
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2 months ago
0
Qwerty_Qwerty_5290
what this shit.
attori Hanzō (服部 半蔵, c. 1542[1] – January 2, 1597) or Second Hanzō, nicknamed Oni no Hanzō (鬼の半蔵, Demon Hanzō),[2] was a famous samurai of the Sengoku era, who served the Tokugawa clan as a general, credited with saving the life of Tokugawa Ieyasu and then helping him to become the ruler of united Japan. He is often a subject of various portrayals in modern popular culture.
Hanzō was known as an expert tactician and a master of sword fighting, and was included in cultural sobriquet as one of Tokugawa's 16 divine generals (Tokugawa jūrokushinshō).[3][4][5]
He became known as the Second Hanzō. He would later earn the nickname Oni no Hanzō (鬼の半蔵, Demon Hanzō)[2] because of the fearless tactics he displayed in his operations; this moniker also distinguished him from Watanabe Hanzō (Watanabe Moritsuna), who is nicknamed Yari no Hanzō (槍の半蔵, Spear Hanzō).[6]
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the system is kinda bs. power system unclear. character progression too unnatural.
nice, story about sunagakure. prety cool. its puppet and heal skill . got level system. funy and tranlate is good enough need more chapter to review again maybe after you post 200+[img=faceslap]
Is this a translation? Thanks X
Mendaki gunung lewati lembah Sungai mengalir indah ke samudra Bersama teman bertualang Tempat yang baru blum pernah terjamah Suasana yang ramai di tengah kota Selalu waspadalah kalau berjalan Siap menolong orang di mana saja Informasi penting disajikan secara kronologis Gozaru gozaru itulah asalnya Pembela kebenaran dan keadilan Hey! Ninja gozaru Di dahan pohon dia mulai beraksi Menjaga anak-anak bermain di taman ADVERTISEMENT Bunga-bunga indah terbang ke awan Membawa hati kita jadi gembira Gozaru gozaru itulah asalnya Pembela kebenaran dan keadilan Hey! Ninja gozaru
I don't like MCs who interfere too much in other people's household affairs
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
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Top tear Naruto fic!! The characters, the story progression, especially the comedy amidst the somewhat bleak ninja setting of Suna- all are top notch!! Can’t wait for more chapters!!
name your patreon name your patreonname your patreonname your patreonname your patreonname your patreonname your patreonname your patreonname your patreonname your patreon
for free... its good maybe? genre : Comedy System Action Grind? Con: its to few, inedmore? Will be coming back! Thank you so much.” Will be coming back! Thank you so much.”
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what this shit. attori Hanzō (服部 半蔵, c. 1542[1] – January 2, 1597) or Second Hanzō, nicknamed Oni no Hanzō (鬼の半蔵, Demon Hanzō),[2] was a famous samurai of the Sengoku era, who served the Tokugawa clan as a general, credited with saving the life of Tokugawa Ieyasu and then helping him to become the ruler of united Japan. He is often a subject of various portrayals in modern popular culture. Hanzō was known as an expert tactician and a master of sword fighting, and was included in cultural sobriquet as one of Tokugawa's 16 divine generals (Tokugawa jūrokushinshō).[3][4][5] He became known as the Second Hanzō. He would later earn the nickname Oni no Hanzō (鬼の半蔵, Demon Hanzō)[2] because of the fearless tactics he displayed in his operations; this moniker also distinguished him from Watanabe Hanzō (Watanabe Moritsuna), who is nicknamed Yari no Hanzō (槍の半蔵, Spear Hanzō).[6]