Hattori , Puppet Tyrant in Sand

the system is kinda bs. power system unclear. character progression too unnatural.

alright this had a solid start could've been a great novel but author just had to fulfill his pakura and karura fetish and ruin this entire story and make it an abslolute garbage with no stakes and charector development just flimsy idiotic mc moments and nonsensical decision with everyone just praising him like he's hashirama second coming and more importantly they're like mc -10iq others -1000iq it's that bad don't read it it's an absolute garbage novel no hate to you TL you did a perfect job hate is to it's real author

the guy wrap bandage once and baam, skill created! lvl up! It doesn't make sense when a new skill was learned from doing nothing else but bandaging. He also claims to be a medical ninja despite not being a ninja nor a doctor. This is just so stupid.

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nice, story about sunagakure. prety cool. its puppet and heal skill . got level system. funy and tranlate is good enough need more chapter to review again maybe after you post 200+[img=faceslap]

I don't like MCs who interfere too much in other people's household affairs

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Please don't drop this fanfic, the story's just getting interesting

Kinda rushed after he beat Iwagakure army + Jinchuriki singlehandedly. He got Sharingan for no reason, became Jinchuriki, and forced betrayal plot. Even though the pacing is really good before this

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