Reborn as a Saiyan in marvel

the idea of the story decent execution of the story semi decent the writing style changes from chapter to chapter like he had a scouter taken from them didn't do nothing about it didn't even seem to care had his leg mingled and what he was unconscious for 3 weeks and he's all better now he didn't even eat the bean so how could he fully heal like that and what's kingpin got to do with the animals in oscorp. nothing adds up and it jumps around and I don't know how anybody else has a notice this maybe they don't care but this story needs a lot of editing

The writing is very strange man, 1 chapter was great, now the 3rd onwards keeps putting those messages in another format, it's very bad to read and understand what's going on, there's the issue of the MC's power, this is definitely not a sayajin It's very weak, it's an alternative Saiyan as they say, but it's very weak, there's the scene of him fighting Spider-Man and like the guy is a giant ape about 20m tall, and being knocked down with just one A new Spider-Man's punch is bone, and Mat jumping high punching the monkey hahaha. and it has the overpowered tag which means that the MC is very powerful, but in the fanfic he has nothing strong. translation portuguese to english.

A lot of people are complaining about the powerscaling and the way the story is written thus far, and I agree with all of that, but my confusion comes from his knowledge, its all over the place. Like, does he know what a saiyan is? does he know he's in the marvel world? He seems to have moments where he knows peter is spidey, recognizes the parker name when he's adopted, but doesn't know daredevil? Also for his saiyan side, he was awake when he was being sent away, no? even if not, if has knowledge of what the marvel universe is, he should at least have a passing knowledge of what a saiyan is, right? I mean, people who don't watch anime or read manga have heard of dragon ball, as its just that popular. I think this story has potential, but it may require a rewrite at this point, before it gets too far. Not only to clear up some of the inconsistent writing styles, but also to make it more clear what he knows and doesn't know. Also, to stop him from getting destroyed in oozaru form by spidey and daredevil, cause that's just dumb.

note this isn't my final review .I will chan geit as the series goes onReincarnating a Saiyan in marvel is an interesting choice, this fanfic has good potential.My fear for this fanfic is powerscaling . Ppl like to say if they were to become Saiyan they would reach the super Saiyan and become like Goku and Vegeta , completely undervaluing all the hardwork that Goku and Vegeta put in and all the ppl that helped them achieve there goals , in reality if u become a Saiyan and u didn't have anything that Goku and Vegeta had u could train for your life and only be as strong as raditz or nappa and never ever achieving super Saiyan , I hope u write Saiyan genes properly this time . Now the mc is in marvel , personally i dont believe any character from dragon ball would even reach top 20 of the strongest characters in marvel comics that's opinion bc most of dragon ball scaling cam easily be found in marvel comics that's not saying the MC reaching does power levels wouldn't make sense, the mc is still a Saiyan , saiyan grow stronger in response to stronger opponents , even tho i believe the db is weaker verse , a saiyan cam reach the top tiers of marvel if he has the right experience and training he should reach that power . The technology in marvel comics should be more advanced than dragonball, so better training equipment than in dragon ball

1st chapter got me excited. By the third chapter a lot of writing inconsistencies start. Feels like the age of the characters is kinda off or they are doing timeskips without saying. good possibility it's Ai content, but not certain. Might just need re-working to make the story flow better.

The novel sucks to be honest, the protagonist is incredibly weak, even worse than Goku when he came to earth, my god he lost against daredevil, even if he has no combat experience, awakening his sayayin lineage even 10% would have been enough to deal with him, not to mention he had awakened 30% just before, and also the zenkai he received before is absurdly pathetic, the author went out of his way to leave the protagonist incredibly weak, Goku with 10 power was able to withstand bullets and lift small cars. Also, the dialogue is horrible, the black lettering and the way it's done is cancer to the eyes. The dialogues are like this: "Daredevil, the dialogue", I mean, I think he is the only author who puts a ", " instead of ":", and that is also a horrible form of dialogue, these should be like this: "Your mother," Peter said angrily. The author is probably a newbie and doesn't have much idea about Dragon Ball power levels.

The author randomly changing how he is writing and going to a chat style kills this novel for me

The story is pretty inconsistent, it's clear that AI is used. The writing is written badly. The MC has no goal, he adds nothing to the story of Marvel other than being an anomaly. The X-Men somehow can't tell if he's a mutant or an alien despite testing on him. The main character loses when he shouldn't, what I mean is that even though a saiyan is being used, it's more like an oc race due to the disparity in ability to an actual saiyan. Also, characters don't act like they usually would, they help him for no apparent reason other than that he's the MC. Writing Quality - 2 stars, I've seen worse and its translated so it gets a slight pass Stability of Updates - 4 stars, it's updated almost daily. Story development - 1 star, he merely exists in Marvel. Character Design - 1 star, he is a basic ahh saiyan, what more can I say. World Background - 2 stars, nothing of any value is added to Marvel, but Marvel is good on its own despite nothing being added. This is my review for this story.

The first few chapters are great, but then all came rolling downhill. I have no idea what is happening and so confusing.

Not gonna lie a poor weak excuse of a saiyan. Weak AF.

It's an interesting Idea but the writting part feels a bit off, but you get used to it. And about the mc i think he feels dumb like I can understand about not knowing about marvel and all, but in his last life he used to be a office worker so he had some experience with life, but in the story he gets dragged arround by characters. So I feel a little lacking there. The conversations needs a little work, but you can give it a go..........

For me, it's utterly unbearable to read. 10 chapters in, I already had a freakin' migraine. The concept is good. I'm all for a saiyan mc in a Marvel world but this was absolutely butchered. Grammar is passable but if you combine that with nonsensical writing format, the combination was to me as what strobe lights would be to a seizure patient. I'm not one to put down authors, specially ones with potential but... I don't know man. This is coming from a "you hurt me so I hurt you" perspective. I should've paid attention to the rating. I swear to god, trolls are cancer to the world. If not for the fact that I've unearth a few gems among the low raters, I wouldn't even give this a chance.

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I think this book had a lot of potential, and the author has great ideas. It needs to be Rewritten. I say this because too many plot threads are dropped there's not enough grief for certain things that have happened and I know that if my sibling had gotten into kind of trouble Peter did I wouldn't have blown him off for training so the MC is currently a baka selfish s*** head and stupid as hell. MC uses the Parkers and mutants for everything and then just does stupid s***. but thank you so much for doing your best, and I appreciate your efforts in this story