Novel's Extra: The Lost Heir of Dragon Queen

Hello, author here! I’ll keep this brief. World Setting: This story takes place in a modern fantasy world filled with magic, mysteries, and powerful entities. About the MC: The protagonist is a half-dragon, born to the Dragon Queen but forced to live away from her. Their relationship plays a pivotal role in the story. The MC is not overpowered—while he is strong for his age, he has clear limitations and plenty of room to grow. Novel Focus: This novel combines elements of wish fulfillment with a solid, character-driven story. While there are satisfying moments for the readers, the focus is on meaningful development, world-building, and emotional depth. A Note: This is my first time writing, so I’m open to feedback! Please let me know about any mistakes or areas for improvement—I’m eager to learn and grow. Thank you for reading 😊 Feel free to treat this as a Q&A, and I’ll answer any questions you have!"

Back with the promised review. Currently up-to-date with the novel and I'm loving it so far. Gave it a full 5 star in all so that it will be noticed better but I'll say, the World Background hasn't been really touched and the MC's character is a bit confusing since he has an unknown backstory. I highly recommend it and I hope the author doesn't drop. Thanks again for such a good novel this far 😁😁😁

Good story but the reason why I gave it a lower score is because the author missed so much good potential. You start to get into the background of this abandoned child to the dragon queen and understand all the mistreatment he underwent because of his mother hating him for being half dragon, and when it comes to this climatic build up to see how the mc will deal with it…… he’s just like oh yeah I forgive you super anticlimactic really could of drawn that out and got really good character growth and development rather than just yeah you abandoned me it’s ok give me power blah blah blah man this could of been a great story that pulled you in mushed shot bro😔

A good rating because of the interesting story and hoping it would get more better in future

Good

Great read. I will update my review after 50 chapters

Haven't read it yet but the synopsis is a good one. If it's good, I will update my review

don't read it this is waste of time .the mc is stupid

I've just started reading your novel and I'm really enjoying it, so I hope you'll continue working on it.

Looks promising... I think the author rushed a bit because most of the chapters were fast-paced without going into the necessary details and the dialogue was a bit stiff.

it's a good read and i like this take on a system. the MC doesn't strike me as someone brain dead like you tend to find in stories similar to this. Having said that past chapter 30, the author definitely needs an editor. Names are missing letters, grammatical errors that force you to mentally substitute the word out, and it disrupts the overall flow. Kael selecting his squad should have been fun but was ruined by grammar issues. Adrian/Adria for the protagonist was particularly annoying. it's overall a fun read but not one that i would advise spending coins on.

The story is good and has more potential. But the writing is not as good as story is. He is making dialogue that doesn't fit just to make it mysterious and to add a sense of darkness.Relationship and friendship are just feeling too forcefull. like og mc of novel challenged our mc try to crush him but in next few chapters they become rivals when I was reading that i felt absolute cringe. Writing need improvement and story is too fast paced. Everything is perfect other than that. Author need to work on relationship and dialogue first than story. Highly recommend