I really like this story but I stop updating for a month, and I'm still waiting, I read it when it just came out, but it doesn't advance enough and I'm afraid that the creator has abandoned it please update with more chapters 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
3 months ago
7
Tsukuyomi777
The best Spiderman in DC fanfic I have ever read by far, the personality and the characters are awesome, I like the way the creator has given depth to his backstory and established him as a character. i would just love to see how the author progresses with the story with the killer frost storyline and Peter's new journey
2 months ago
3
captainfatbelly
good book -1 star for super dense mc trope otherwise the story and the writing is really good
I love it, it has everything I like about DC and Marvel all in one. If you like Spiderman and DC, then you'll be very entertained, and I hope the quality doesn't drop in the next chapters.
As long as it continues like this, then this will be one of my favorites. 😁👍
2 months ago
1
cp0_officer
Great story, the only issue is the upload schedule.
Really hope you keep writing this it’s really good
12 days ago
0
Niaia
How dare you? How f-ing dare you? I am disgusted by you. How dare you only have 17 chapter? Here I am, finally finding an awesome fanfiction and now there is none left?!?! The universe is truly evil. But for real lovely story and I hope you continue for a long time
a month ago
0
Daoist_Dan
Spoilers. I'll press the spoiler button when WN stops it removing paragraph spacing.
The concept is good but I don't think it's written well.
Too many characters have been added to the mc's close circle. Zatanna, Dragon, Ted Grant, even a random cat. They aren't added well. Like they aren't in service of telling the intended story, rather the writer went why not and forced it.
And one more thing. The way the story made him continue martial arts after his abilities come is beyond forced; it's the main reason I didn't continue. He goes to the dojo and "suddenly" remembers oh yeah, he should leave because he's superhuman now. But not before revealing his abilities. And he's going to still be getting martial arts training.
^^^ I feel insulted a writer thought people would buy this flow of events.
3.4 stars, 3,4,2,4,4
a month ago
0
ZachDinoBoy
Really like the story just wished it was updated a bit more frequently but hey as long it doesn't get dropped I'm happy. Keep up the good work looking forward to keep reading it
a month ago
0
Danang_Nafdika
Reveal Spoiler
a month ago
0
Grai
Please don't let any of Peter's family members die (if it's a good plot).
I really like this fanfic, keep it up my friend. It will be a pleasure to follow your fic.
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Blessings.
I really like this story but I stop updating for a month, and I'm still waiting, I read it when it just came out, but it doesn't advance enough and I'm afraid that the creator has abandoned it please update with more chapters 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The best Spiderman in DC fanfic I have ever read by far, the personality and the characters are awesome, I like the way the creator has given depth to his backstory and established him as a character. i would just love to see how the author progresses with the story with the killer frost storyline and Peter's new journey
good book -1 star for super dense mc trope otherwise the story and the writing is really good
HE'S BACKKKKKKKK.
I love it, it has everything I like about DC and Marvel all in one. If you like Spiderman and DC, then you'll be very entertained, and I hope the quality doesn't drop in the next chapters. As long as it continues like this, then this will be one of my favorites. 😁👍
Great story, the only issue is the upload schedule.
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Really hope you keep writing this it’s really good
How dare you? How f-ing dare you? I am disgusted by you. How dare you only have 17 chapter? Here I am, finally finding an awesome fanfiction and now there is none left?!?! The universe is truly evil. But for real lovely story and I hope you continue for a long time
Spoilers. I'll press the spoiler button when WN stops it removing paragraph spacing. The concept is good but I don't think it's written well. Too many characters have been added to the mc's close circle. Zatanna, Dragon, Ted Grant, even a random cat. They aren't added well. Like they aren't in service of telling the intended story, rather the writer went why not and forced it. And one more thing. The way the story made him continue martial arts after his abilities come is beyond forced; it's the main reason I didn't continue. He goes to the dojo and "suddenly" remembers oh yeah, he should leave because he's superhuman now. But not before revealing his abilities. And he's going to still be getting martial arts training. ^^^ I feel insulted a writer thought people would buy this flow of events. 3.4 stars, 3,4,2,4,4
Really like the story just wished it was updated a bit more frequently but hey as long it doesn't get dropped I'm happy. Keep up the good work looking forward to keep reading it
Reveal Spoiler
Please don't let any of Peter's family members die (if it's a good plot). I really like this fanfic, keep it up my friend. It will be a pleasure to follow your fic. . Blessings.
i like it NO- Harem Right ?
Good.