SuperStar!

Thank you for sharing your story!I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep writing — you're doing great! 🚀Thank you for sharing your story!I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep writing — you're doing great! 🚀

for realism I would suggest incorporate the good and bad side of things, romance,breakup, smoking, alcohol,party,and some fun and also emotional and mental stuff to give his songs more meaning,i know his songs come from space but wouldn't hurt

this is great. hope to read more of this

Well, the concept is great but the conversation is a whole lot messy and there is no sense just things are happening in baseless order, and no world-building and character are building if it can be improved then it will be good but from my experience,e I can say that this novel is getting to hiatus...

what the update schedule would love to read more chapters. been a while since I read a good fanfic story

je recycle la critique d'un gars qui dit tout ce que je pense. (j'ai arreter de lire il y a deux mois mais c'etait encore dans ma biblioteque) Quel est le bon point de cette histoire ? Tout d’abord, la famille, devrais-je dire trop accommodante ? Trop aimant ? Deuxièmement, la route vers la célébrité est trop facile. Pas de pression, de lutte, d’envie,... rien. C’est comme... un bon jour, il écrit une chanson, il est devenu une star, signe un agent, écrit la chanson suivante, devient une superstar,.... LA FIN.

"You’ve created something truly special. Keep writing – the world needs more stories like this!"

What good point does this story have? First of all the family- should I say too accomodating? too loving? Second is road to stardom-too easy. No pressure, struggle, desire,... nothing. It's like like- one good day he writes a song, he became star, signs agent, writes next song, becomes a superstar,....THE END.

this is the best story Read in months love intrust Billie Elise (music duos) fuel eminem song for p.didy

It's a good idea making Ed not part of the world but could be better by making other artists not on the world so there's diversity in his song. Story does get all over at times but if you can speed up the story and start adding a lot of other artist reaction then I think the story would be elevated

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VERY good so far as long as u dont insert too much drama and keep politics meaning both government and company out it will be awesome. i understand having to put some drama but i just dont want the story to fall into a mess of constant drama just cause it all u can think of to make it keep going. it would be good to have some of the songs wrote out when he sings them and reactions put in between verses just a thought but the way ur doing it aint bad. also it would be good to name the original artist so people can look up an listen to the right song.

"Superstar is a celebration of ambition, resilience, and the pursuit of greatness—highly recommended!"

Story is nice and I like the Mc and his family, few things kinda is mess and but still story has great potential. I Personally looking forward to read more. ..... .... ... .. .

The idea is very commendable but the plot, OMG! Let's start with the MC, he has the personality of a carton box, none of the supporting characters are likeable either. The fanfic is full of one dimensional characters. It was actually a great idea to think of a world without Ed Sheeran, where the MC breaks into stardom with his songs during Covid lockdown, but boy the number of views and followers he gets are so bizarre, it's as though the author tossed around random numbers on a whim. Great great idea but terribly executed.