Harry Potter: I am the Legend

This story has alot of potential to be great but it's too disorganised and makes no sense. One moment the story is heading in a direction then then the other its heading into a completely different story. Stuff that seem important and Critical gets forgotten about after a couple chapter and something new comes to replace for it to be forgotten again. The MC is too emotional and makes no sense, he can defeat a top general of Grindelwald but is struggling against muggles, everything feels forced, doesn't flow naturally and makes no sense. It has potential but it needs to be rewritten with a clear story in mind not chaos

Sorry but i just cant handle the start of the book it just didnt hook me into it, i think mainly because of the background chosen. Still its pretty good overall and i recomend it if you dont have anything else to read and i mean it

My biggest issue with this is that the main character has the same maturity, oftentimes less, than his 11 year old peers, despite having an 'adult soul'. Additionally, the main character continually waxes on about how he has an Eastern background and is thus above such things as conflict. The main character needs work.

Absolutely amazing story I highly recommend. it's set during Tom riddle / Voldermorts day at school but has a huge world outside of hogwarts which it explore very well and the main character isnt super overpowered and the powerr progression is exceptional well done give him both weakness and strengths. On top of multiple chapters everyday making it one of my top current reads.

good stuff tbh...............................................................................................................................................................................................

I have to agree with whatever Khaled said. This story is indeed disorganized among other negatives that he gets into. Of course the way that the mc unlocks his animagus transformation is perfect and a few other scenes are just mwah but why cannot the mc use wand less magic that powerfully, why can’t he use the “dragon” part of him, why is the system so inconsistent, and so many other whys and whats this story really should be rewritten. A good story yet one filled with bad and good writting I hope you have a good day author and goodbye

useless system useless mc,do you really tell me Voldemort is that powerfull at early stage ,useless story writing style , system for help not to cause problem

This story is confusing. Like first 20 chapters don't have anything about system and then some system is added in between without any context and many plot holes in the story. I think it's cuz of the translation

it is good but disorganized , the story gives me heart ache especially the death of algaia

Sin romance? Sin harem? Solo un tipo al azar que ahora es compañero de clase de tom riddle? Por alguna razón no puedo encontrar entusiasmo por leer la historia, si alguien quiere, puede hacerme un poco de spoiler, y decirme si la historia es interesante, y si hay romance o comedia, mis géneros favoritos.

A piece of junk. The characters are very poorly designed. Not worth reading. It's just annoying to read. The main character's interactions with others are so forced and boring.

if I'm not wrong this is a translation, one made with machine. But I have to say, I love the story, and kodoes too the original author. And now this is one of my new favorites. thank you

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