Horus’s betrayal was a cataclysmic event that forever changed the fate of the Imperium of Mankind. After this tragedy, our protagonist wakes up in this world—inside the body of a Space Marine. By a twist of fate, he not only gains permission to create his own Space Marine Chapter but also discovers that his new body, once belonging to Kayvaan, comes with an incredible inheritance: control over three star systems. With his Chapter and newfound power, he must navigate the treacherous politics of the Imperium and the constant threats from xenos, Chaos, and heretics, all while carving out his legacy in this grimdark galaxy.
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This is but another story in which an earthling is put in warhammer 40k Where he wants to inject human rights into the imperium and doesn’t like fighting. The mc has been nerfed dramatically listen to this and see if it makes sense. The main character possesses the body of a space marine but do to a curse the body reverts to pre augmentation Now mc has amazing fighting abilities but no body to actually be strong. The main character although having his body reverted only has Internal injuries that doesn’t let him have any sort of modification FOR NO REASON WHATSOEVER. Author just wants to nerf mc so that he never fights on the front lines.
The story premise is good. Execution needs work. Chapters need serious combing through to fix mistakes. Mistakes like calling the Adeptus Custodes , the imperial guard. Or calling space marine chapters , star marine corps. This might also just be a translation for all we know.
A Warhammer 40k story... very noice.... .
It's been a while since I read a story like this, the progression is satisfactory and it seems realistic enough I suppose. I believe this story is worth reading, it just depends on your taste. My only downside is that there are few chapters (22 at the time of writing this review).
Take this 5 ⭐ for being a Warhammer fanfic .
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FOR THE EMPEROR ....love 40K fanfic .....
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I love everything Warhammer 40k, and the dynamic between Sub-Sector Governors and a Space Marine Chapter Master is a compelling concept. For such a story to truly resonate, the Chapter Master must possess a strong and pure gene seed
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