Delinquent High

Delinquent High

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Author: daistrop
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"Delinquent High" the story follows a young boy Haruta Masamuta a troubled teenage who is sent to the Delinquent High, a school for rebellious and problematic students

As Haruta navigate his new surrounding,he meets a group Maya a Dark skin Mexican Damsel,and Rudoni, a charming bad boy . Together,they form a tight-knit group and begin to uncover the dark secrets of Delinquent High.

As they dig deeper,they discover that the school is a front for a corrupt organization,led by a mysterious figure,will stop nothing to maintain their power and control over the school.

Determined to take down the corrupt organization and free Delinquent High from its grasp, Haruta and friends from a secret Aliance and embark on a perilous journey.

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Okay I read this novel to chapter 7 and they are a whole lot of blemishes frankly I would not have read past chapter 1 if not of my preferences for school based action novels However since the book seemed to have some potential at least in my head I would be highlighting most of the issues I found with the novel just incase you aren't aware of them Alright firstly the writing is very bad and poorly executed your probably a newbie writer so if your writing and publishing books for much more than just a hobby you will have to work on it as I rated your writing 1 star. Story development is also poorly written, paced and executed as am not even sure of what's going on in the plot as you introduced a Nigerian girl whom the mc had known from somewhere and right after that chapter he straight up forgot her and didn't even mention her for days it's a deliquent school yet nothing of note happened in the first 7 chapters which were at least 2 weeks according to how much time had passed and he also had one scene when he made a friend which he started saying some cliches like my first friend or some sort giving literally no respect for Bisi. In days no other characters were introduced apart from some weird stuff about the principal always looking at him for some pranks which was also poorly written tbh its all chaotic would have given it 0 stars if it was possible. Charcter design we don't even have a clue on how the mc looks and the only characters which we were told how they looked namely Bisi and That other female friend well long story short it deserves 0 stars. The only good thing about this book is its synopsis,name, genre and updating stability which I gave four stars instead of five since am pretty sure that the word count in the chapters after chapter 4 were below 700 Lastly World background is by far the worst thing about the novel which to be frank deserves negative stars PS : I would really like for your book to improve and become something read worthy as am depraved from school based actions in novels this days

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