The Monster King's Legacy
After being diagnosed with a rare terminal illness, all Lance could do was wait for his death, unable to move as he lay on the hospital bed for months. In his last moments, all he wished for is another chance at life, so he can live, but fate plays a fast one on him.
Shortly after death, Lance wakes up in the middle of a gruesome massacre and battle between two goblin tribes.
At the end of the skirmish, Lance is captured by the female goblin tribe, and just when he was about to lose everything again, he makes a promise to lead the goblins to victory. Out of desperation, they agree, and later on, Lance becomes an unsuspecting leader of a goblin tribe as a human.
Now, surrounded by unsuspecting goblin beauties, Lance vows to life a fulfilling life in this new world while leading his people to prosperity!
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A/N: Hey, dear reader... read the book, you'll love it.
There will be lemons as always, just not with the same intensity and frequency as my last book. I plan to focus more on the story and relationships than flavour scenes at every turn.
Though the main character is not a villain type, he isn't a goodie two shoes either.
No Rape. No NTR. No Yuri. No Netori.
I plan to write something where the MC's harem aren't just brainless meat sacks, but actually impact the story and the MC.
Read the book, you'll love it!
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I still haven't read it yet and I totally didn't click on this novel due to the cover pic.
I did find interesting and plan to continue reading. Overall it's okay, it's a light read, lack some depth. At moment it has some problems, the story lacks good build-ups/development, seens too smooth sailing at moment, the MC has some dificulties at start, but it's resolved very soon and basically on their own, the MC seens very naive, the girls also. I think it lacks more conflict, more factions within the goblin tribe and more malice towards the MC in general, I would say that definetely needs to expand on the goblin culture, like how they live, what they believe, what events/celebrations they do and how they are, what they admire or dislike, even the goals of the female tribe, questions like they kidnap men the same way the male goblins do with females? At moment it's too superficial explained. spoiler* I think the decision to make the MC the chief of the tribe was very bad, it was too rushed in my opinion, it lacked a proper buil-up for that. The tribe was too accepting of this, it lacked more conflict here and the factions that I mentioned earlier. Also it was less believable, why a stranger with different race, culture, faith or lack off it, and with a suspicious background be choosen to lead the tribe... I think it could happen, with time and overcoming opposition, but not like written here. They want his knowledged, but they could obtain it with other ways or with more malicious means, so why would they surrender their power and authority? It would make more sense if he started as an advisor for the goblin chief/queen or maybe he could be accepted as chief with the basis in some god or something, like the MC being their apostole or envoy... It would make more beliavable spoiler* On character development of the girls, at moment Mira, Zarra and the balcksmith are okay, Rynne is also okay. I don't like Lia, she seens to become too close to the MC right of the bat, even like they already know each other, all they girls sort have this inexplicable closeness, but on Lia it's worst, and she seens very bland now, even more because she was the previous chief. I think it needs more development on how the MC and the girls evolve their relationship. Some thoughts on the future development of the story: concerned on how the MC will make his goblin kingdom, it will have more conflict and opposition or they will just accept it like him being the chief of the tribe? The MC seens to already be thinking on have contact or conflict with other races like beastfolk or humans, but it's seens crazy because he is on pile of sand now, very weak position to be. How they will survive the humans, more inteligent and malicious than their current enemies? How the MC will deal with betrayals and the polictics of his goblin/monster kingdom? Remembering he doesn't have no legitimacy, just a human crowing over monsters. I wish he could develop more before future conflicts. I will keep reading like I said, cheering for the story. OBS: English is not my primary language, so sorry if the review is poorly written.
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Love the story so far and I hope to see more chapters 😁
Great story so far! I’m really looking forward to see how the story develops 🫡🫡🫡
The fact that the protagonist isn't OP from the beginning is nice, as it gives him room to develop physically and psychologically, but as of my last read (chapter 72) his power is mediocre at best. It's not his fault, since his magic is related to "healing", so he relies on strategies. The harem isn't bad, but the relationship lacks depth, as there's no backstory or reason beyond admiration to justify his love for the protagonist, making it feel forced or simple. Overall, this novel is for those who have the patience for a slow burn and like the "kingdom building" tag.
Quite a good Story so far. The Writing Quality of this Novel is on the better side than most on Webnovel, and the Character and World Design are quite good so far. Its slow paced but not too slow to make you Bored. I'm also happy with the 18+ Content since its not 5 Chapters in and every 3 Chapters after that. Im looking for Novels and not pure 18+ Content, I'm fine with it being there since it allows stories to go deeper without skipping the more Mature Parts. Just don't let get in the Way of the Storytelling. 5 Stars so far, maybe I will edit it later since there are not enough Chapters out to judge if the "Lemons" will get out of hand.
I am hooked! I look everyday for another chapter to see if it’s posted. I highly recommend everyone take an opportunity to read this story.
Pretty good overall. Could use more interaction with outside races by now. but that's about it.
Going pretty well so far. Not giving it 5 stars as there is still room for improvement but definitely worth the read.
Hermanos! this book is really good. solid world building with a great mc. I'd be lying if I didn't say I wish the mc was a little stronger, but he's doing great with what he has. also, the authors writing is pretty solid compared to others on this app! Great book, and you should definitely add to your library! 🫡
I have read to chapter 43 so far at the time of this assessment and I must say it has not disappointed. It's an isekai for sure, but I'm finding the growth and story enjoyable. I implore you to continue this work as it has a lot of directions for growth. [img=update]
I really appreciate this book. It's an all round great read.
Some of the best writing I've found on this site! The story progression is solid and so happy to see likable and believable characters. They all have their own personalities and not just bland female characters. I wish we had some character descriptions or more detailed descriptions of them all in the story but so far it's been fantastic.
Pretty interesting so far, I curious to see what other ways there are the get stronger. I excited about the progression with other characters as well, maybe a bit more use of his magic to increase his rate of physical improvement.