Naruto: Starting with Nano machine
Author: Gaurav_Kosare
3.38
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After finishing reading the latest chapter of Nano Machine Manhwa at 3 am, I finally closed my eyes to sleep but when I woke up I saw the almighty himself, GOD
Due to his mistake, I died. When he asked which world I wanted to live in, I chose the Naruto world with Nano Machine as a cheat.
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just for being something that I have rarely seen I would say keep going no matter what anyone says it's worth it
i recently came accross this fanfiction i must say it has potential so please dont drop this fanfiction 🙏🏻
Author, your fanfic is very good, good grammar and interesting story, but I have some doubts, will the protagonist have the powers of the six paths? Rinnegan, sage body, sage mode of the six paths? Because sincere sense the Nara and Yamanaka lineage has many limitations, I think there has never been anyone at the kage level in these clans, so will the protagonist seek these powers? I would love it
It had potential. But, the writing style feels too ...mechanical. It's like trying to grasp a cloud with your hands, you read an entire chapter and realize that it doesn't contain anything substantial. When it comes to the characters, they too seem mechanical. They exist and speak like npcs powered by chatgpt. When it comes to power and abilities. It is apparent that the author (or the LLM) isn't all too familiar with the more detailed stuff. The Nara family has shadow jutsu, but unlike shadow powers in other media, these do not get amplified by darkness or night (the opposite is true in Naruto, this has also been explained by Shikamaru). The family is also famous for being super lazy and intellectual - I see no trace of anything like that here. Their personalities are all wrong. His cheat also conveniently perform actions it should by no means be able to do with the information it possesses. This has potential, but it is clear that the majority (if not all) of this is generated by AI. Some people might find this to their tastes, but not mine. It's fine to use AI to improve errors and assist you on the way, this however, is fully just ai slop that I refuse to continue to read.
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i wish u all the best author but its bit too much edge lord for me
too cringe and ai for me
Nanomachines, son. They harden in response to physical trauma.
Sorry, but I just could not get over that writing. Basic mistakes keep being made. I'll try reading this again if the author gets a proof reader.
The premise was interesting but the execution was pretty bad. The entire story reads like it was written by A.I. There's no actual substance to the story or characters, it's just lines of sentences strwen together
It a good fic but too much Ai 50% is repeating what he said in the beginning of the chapter
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Amazing amazing amaing Best novel with balanced overpowerdness and story development Real character development Very much like”the yamanaka genius” MORE CHAPTERS
Nice fanfic! I'm honestly stumped at the low ratings given for this story. I hope you'll not be discouraged by them, and continue to release new chapters
Absolute cinema .....................................................................................................................................;