there Sword art online element. MC got Kirito Skill. recommend
there Sword art online element. MC got Kirito Skill. recommendthere Sword art online element. MC got Kirito Skill. recommend
A surprisingly decent Kimimaro fanfic. Aside from some skill/character names being mistranslated, it's all good. Those errors were also corrected in the following chapters so A for effort.
The mc is too much of a show off, most of jutsu are being revealed prematurely and when he revealed it he left his enemies go on with their life, the ability of mc to reveal his jutsu without care of the world is really amazing this is not a force plot but an actual idiotic mc and what happened to the 5000 books he read, it seems that it entered the eye and left the brain, the force plot of being mentored by tsunade and using a disguise of Kato Dan and Nawaki so the mc can connect with her at intial part and heal her trauma at later part he also made her learn Thread Healing amplifying the whole ordeal of him trying to fine an answer for his Bloodline Disease can be sum up as bs at most he just need to discussion with her not spend 2 years remember he already learned Medical Jutsu,Medical Knowledge(5000 books) gain,Medical Experience(Kabuto,orochimaru and etc) and His Own Experience(Wandering Doctor) as for trying to train his body he doesn't need her at all In the end it just the Author trying to pair up Tsunade and Kimimaro the difference of age is enough for Tsunade name to change into Pedonade atleast is not the BS 7-12 sleeping with her Chinese authors forcing Tsunade to be a braindead and a Pedonade I started hating harem just for the fact that Chinese Authors most of the time ruin her and turn her into Pedonade I bet if Koharu Utatane has a transformation technique like tsunade the whole series this Chinese Authors or Peverted Authors will also use her as well I bet after the mc goes to akatsuki he will magically able to connect with konan who only have nagato(sibling) and yahiko(lover) in her heart Falling in love to others is bound to be near impossible even jiraiya has little to no chance with tsunade as her heart is already with Dan also Mc combat prowess almost never change from ch 1 to the later ch at most he just throws new Abilities Clow Cards are nerf here the mc don't utilise his abilities well enough and just throw them randomly like a fool another thing is that he has 100% accuracy of throws 100% not 99% or 1% a 100% he got these with tenten and these are useless as Neji can just dodge them unless he trying to hit the spot itself and not neji its like someone saying you can get a jackpot(100%) at slot machine just to lose all your money for only getting a [Thank you for patronage] If you give the rewards mc got to the real kimimaro then the combat power of real kimimaro will surpass mc by a lot.
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i think you should post more so i can read. what raw name? is it original or translate? when you update? how many chapter this story go?.....
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A surprisingly decent Kimimaro fanfic. Aside from some skill/character names being mistranslated, it's all good. Those errors were also corrected in the following chapters so A for effort.
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The mc is too much of a show off, most of jutsu are being revealed prematurely and when he revealed it he left his enemies go on with their life, the ability of mc to reveal his jutsu without care of the world is really amazing this is not a force plot but an actual idiotic mc and what happened to the 5000 books he read, it seems that it entered the eye and left the brain, the force plot of being mentored by tsunade and using a disguise of Kato Dan and Nawaki so the mc can connect with her at intial part and heal her trauma at later part he also made her learn Thread Healing amplifying the whole ordeal of him trying to fine an answer for his Bloodline Disease can be sum up as bs at most he just need to discussion with her not spend 2 years remember he already learned Medical Jutsu,Medical Knowledge(5000 books) gain,Medical Experience(Kabuto,orochimaru and etc) and His Own Experience(Wandering Doctor) as for trying to train his body he doesn't need her at all In the end it just the Author trying to pair up Tsunade and Kimimaro the difference of age is enough for Tsunade name to change into Pedonade atleast is not the BS 7-12 sleeping with her Chinese authors forcing Tsunade to be a braindead and a Pedonade I started hating harem just for the fact that Chinese Authors most of the time ruin her and turn her into Pedonade I bet if Koharu Utatane has a transformation technique like tsunade the whole series this Chinese Authors or Peverted Authors will also use her as well I bet after the mc goes to akatsuki he will magically able to connect with konan who only have nagato(sibling) and yahiko(lover) in her heart Falling in love to others is bound to be near impossible even jiraiya has little to no chance with tsunade as her heart is already with Dan also Mc combat prowess almost never change from ch 1 to the later ch at most he just throws new Abilities Clow Cards are nerf here the mc don't utilise his abilities well enough and just throw them randomly like a fool another thing is that he has 100% accuracy of throws 100% not 99% or 1% a 100% he got these with tenten and these are useless as Neji can just dodge them unless he trying to hit the spot itself and not neji its like someone saying you can get a jackpot(100%) at slot machine just to lose all your money for only getting a [Thank you for patronage] If you give the rewards mc got to the real kimimaro then the combat power of real kimimaro will surpass mc by a lot.
**More More More More More** In a world where everything is changing at an incredible rate, where technology is evolving faster than we can master it, where information is available in one click, and where the connections between people are getting stronger and weaker at the same time, something remains unchanged — the thirst for more. We strive for new knowledge, new sensations, new impressions. We want more comfort, more opportunities, more time. We are looking for ways to make our lives better, more interesting, and richer. And this aspiration is one of the driving forces of our development. More More More More More is not just a slogan, it is a philosophy that encourages us not to stop at what we have achieved, but to continue moving forward, overcoming any obstacles. It's a call to action that reminds us that we can achieve more than we think. In a world where every day brings new discoveries and opportunities, it is important to remember that More More More More More is not only a desire for material benefits, but also for spiritual development, for harmony with yourself and the world around you. This is the path to self-realization, to finding your purpose and meaning in life. So let's keep moving forward, overcoming all obstacles, and remember that More More More More More is the key to our success and happiness.