MHA: Sand Sand Fruit

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The story is good and all but its plot driven which ruins the book for me

Free five star idk if the other uploaded Story is a bit stupid and inconsistent at times, but it's a good read and can be improved. ......

MHA Sand-Sand Fruit UPDATE: Originally gave 3 stars due to 1) Author not keeping track of their own previous statements. 2) Author taking the hardest possible route for MC to do anything 3) writing and grammar are surprisingly cohesive and legible. Nothing out of place. Very shocking considering the previous 2 points made me think it was a Chinese translation. Review is now updated to 1 star due to author not liking my previous review and deleting it. I will be re-posting the review every time he does this with amount of deletes and dates. 1st repost January 1, 2025

The entire fic is mediocre at best it fall under the same points of a author needlessly nerfing the protagonist for no reason which makes all the fights feel incredibly boring and frustrating and the grammer and writing quality is mediocre at best the author mixes up people in conversation quite a bit and all the dialouge feels robotic and one dimensional

It's just that the MC is a freaking too much idiot. He might be a kid, but he is a reincarnated person, so he should not be so naive. Just hayz

I can't stand reading all the time, I'm like, are you stupid? MC does things in the stupidest way possible, everything that is simple becomes difficult and I keep asking myself, why can someone reincarnated, who watches anime, who knows that the sand fruit exists, fight or do things this way? so ridiculous.

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a promissing story that was ruined by author's incompetence. shallow characters, no descriptions of their appearances at all. think of the dumbest reason something in the story is happening, and that's the motive

The author is stupidly inconsistent with his statements in the fic, and even if the story is good, I just can't stand how idiotic MC can be, add up shallow dialogue and overall characters and it's borderline a torture to read.

This is a Chinese fanfiction, is it not? The past twenty chapters have pinyin words in them. I don't know where this story is going. The author appears to be trying to hide the MC's true power, but at the same time, constantly puts him in the spotlight. His usage of his Sand Quirk should've also made it obvious that he's involved in a lot of things, but the author made the side characters oblivious to that fact. There are also a few chapters that are duplicates (probably drafts) and/or have duplicated dialogues in them.

is this being written by using chatgpt? from early chapter i can see chatgpt format. not only short but the pace seems too fast, no detail or anything. it seems like author upload it without even edited.

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first of this is A.I made and I know that for a fact (it is very hard to get AI to right a good story and even harder to get it to maintain detail) im also just not particularly a fan of romance being introduced at early on in the book i came in with no real expectations and I'm somehow still disappointed I was happy about the no-harem tag not someone who hates on thinks just cuz AI is involved I just know the quality will get worse and worse as the story continues

too much Chinese elements that it got so boring.