After brutally dying the protagonist drifts through the space between dimensions before meeting a bored GOD seeking a new source of entertainment. How will our protagonist survive in a new world with powers that were once only fiction to them.
Im writing this as a hobby, the update schedule will be whenever I get around to it. Another note Im australian so excuse my foul language, im also slightly ADHD so if I lose my train of thought or get distracted my writing style changes so you might see all sorts of things.
Cover is Ai generated cause I suck at art.
I dont own any character or IP other than my OC.
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Cute cosmic horror's adventures in New York. Dare I say, the good shit.
pretty good read, anyone who's a fan of gender benders will like it, I'm not, so I don't plan on reading more, but that's just me, if you like gender benders one hundred percent give it a read ^^
A gender-bent MC. bit of a murdering asshole but has some morals. Would have made a better dude but that is my opinion. I like the story and anything that's not AI or second language gibberish deserves praise. I like her relationship with jean Now things I don't like. There is too much monologue and technical gamer bs. Not enough plot and character interactions. I think the author is capable of making this story better with more effort. I think this deserves a rewrite but as of now I dropped it cause I got tired of the pacing.
Other than the few mistakes in my opinion I’ve seen so far everything is pretty good. The one thing I will say is don’t rewrite an entire interaction from the other characters view like you did with the Jean Grey meeting if anything add their thought from time to time otherwise it will just slow down the story.
Thank you for writing this novel, it is clear that you are a man of culture and I hope that you continue uploading more chapters, but if it is possible once a day if not at least one every three days, for my part I give 5 stars and my donation. ps my english is kind of bad
I'm just writing a review because I didn't like not having any rating. Anyway give it a go if you want, I'm just having fun and trying to learn to write.
I just noticed I didn’t give a review so have this
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Have not read it yet, but got to help out fellow Australians! 👍
well it a good story
Pretty good story definitely up there with my current favorites.
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