Marvel: Sin Lord

This was great at first, but as time goes by the MC becomes a puppy, this makes the villain tag a little strange........................................................

although I lt was written using ai it was good enough, till Emma frost came looking for the mc, told him come with me to my academic (mc being a fucking idiot went, I mean your own mother sold you, how could you trust a stranger saying let me train you and be apart of my team, he was probably mind fked), then just trains with the hellions and let's Emma frost check all his memories.

Fanfiction written by an artificial intelligence, all the characters look like robots [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Meh, Too much AI and yoo much tragedy [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Empezó muy bien pero con el tiempo el desarrollo del personaje tanto a nivel mental como de poder se estancó por completo. Por ejemplo siempre dice que va mejorar y a progresar para que en el siguiente capítulo se vuelva a estancar. Además todo el tiempo parece que las habilidades del protagonista dan para muchísimo que para lo que las utiliza y me parece bastante ridículo que personajes como Sebastián Shaw no hayan aprovechado su clara falta de madurez para manipularlo y aprovechar sus poderes para absorber las habilidades de otros mutantes lentamente. Más allá de esto me parece una buena historia pero con una clara falta de desarrollo en todos los personajes

One of the best Marvel Mutant stories I’ve read. The main character is realistic in the way he handles his powers and the trouble that comes with it. He’s morally good but is forced by circumstance to do against his wishes. There are a few moments that the plot feels forced but, for the most part everything comes natural. Also it’s seems like Magik is FL but I think Emma is the best girl. Overall highly recommend.

MC: OC Rating: 7/10 MC Power is very interesting and the realisation of the powers is very unique with good highs and lows. Grammar as well as storyline are good.

I don’t understand the reviews below. Nothing about this is even remotely seems writen by AI maybe grammatical fixes idk but this story is actually really cool the ability is unique and intriguing and the first chapter was a banger