This is the story of a young boy who steps into the world of immortals.
If you enjoy fantasy and cultivation novels, give this one a shot. It starts off slow-paced, but I’ll do my best to keep it engaging and not drag things out to the point of frustration.
The main character (MC) is a lone individual who avoids excessive social interactions, including friendships.
This is my first novel, so please forgive any errors. I’m working hard to keep it as clean and polished as possible.
Feel free to point out any mistakes in the comments—I truly appreciate it!
And if you enjoy (or even dislike) the story, please consider leaving a review. Honest feedback of any kind helps me grow as a writer.
(If anyone sends Power Stones or Golden Tickets, thank you in advance—it really means a lot to a newbie like me.)
**cover art isn't mine***
Extremly great cultivation novel! Anyone who’s looking at the comments hesitating if you should read it, trust me and read it!
That's a good writing, tried to keep every character & bg char sense full. Keep options more open for attributes Not just obvious elements (🔥, ⚡, 🌎 etc.) , like illusion,death,life,yin yang many more , didn't introduce any fighting techniques or skills etc. In future I think may be MC will learn alchemy & weapon refining.Hope there are auras ,intents, concepts, domains,laws etc. Love to see in which direction story goes( 3 ⭐ because I don't know how story goes hopefully nxt time I read I can give 5 ⭐)
I just read the first chapters but so far I really like the writing style and characters I met so far. Keep up the good work :)
Start is good but there is not many chapters yet so i dont have much to say. I would recommend everyone to atleast give it a try
Hey, Author's here! Although I am the author of this novel, I will still rate this story 4.4 for myself as I know that it's my first time writing a novel and mistakes are bound to happen. I will try my best to prevent making too many mistakes, so do support me. Do leave a review for this one if you are reading, I might not reply to them, but I will still read them and take them into consideration I don't mind bad reviews, as they will become my learning point, for my next novel, if I tried to write one. This novel will be slow paced in the start as I am still building the Foundation for the story, so bear with it. I will only update one chapter daily for the time being, as writing and editing one chapter a day is my limit right now. Thankyou~
i am hooked writing style is really good keep it up author all the best
why does the title sound so familiar??? Yuan, is that you? does the mc eat monster cores for cultivation?? (i havent read the novel so dont mind me. just came here for the familiar name 😁)