A young man was given a second chance in a new world. He died saving a life but now he must navigate the brutal world of cultivation and fighting against fate. Nothing is free, especially a second chance. Follow Lind as he discovers the world of cultivation and the dark secret of why he was given a second chance.
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First novel on webnovel. I only self-published one other original work on Amazon. I will setup a Discord later. I hope people enjoy this world as I have enjoyed many others. Please note, this will not be fast paced and while it is a harem, I firmly believe relationships should be real as opposed to: Here is MC and new woman that will be his just because.
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Goals:
Effective August 12th 2024 as Webnovel tracks dates:
Power Stones: 275 Stones = 2 bonus chapters; 500 Stones = 3 bonus chapters; and 700 = 5 bonus chapters.
Golden Tickets: Every 75 tickets = 3 Bonus chapters. Assessed weekly and/or end of month
Gifts:
Gift below 2000 Coin one = 1 bonus chapter per gift (limit 2 per week per person)
Dragon (red 2000 one) = 2 Bonus chapters
Castle = 3 bonus chapters
Ship = 5 bonus chapters
Golden Treasure = 8 bonus chapters
Gifts will include name of person who sent it unless you do not wish to be called out. Please note while I will try to stack these, I am only human! I will revise but go for most chapters to bonus as possible. Thank you all for anything we reach and I hope you continue to enjoy story!
MC is very naive be you can see the development and the progress he makes to improve only himself but to help those close to him although I personally would like a bit more chapters with his relationships with his loved one (female and male friends )
this MC i don't know how to describe him but calling him a simp would probably be an insult to simps, his entire clan looks down on him but instead asks how he can help the clan, then he is given the job of cleaning the weapon while others cultivate..
Writing quality: There are very few minor mistakes, the grammar is really good and you cannot really complain about it Character design: He is a kind soul, which a lovely mother, his childhoos is sweet and hard at the same time, but as the story you will see him grow up, and it makes even sense! No stupid character, no unnessesary face slapping, I like how he grows, how he behaves, and cant wait too see more Stoey development: Given a second chance in a new world, he has to grow up from an innocent child to a strong cultivator, the beginning is a bit harder to read but get over it! At some point you can clearly see the flow of the story of this masterpiece Update stability: 3 chapters a week are good but I truly wish for more World background: nothing known of as for now, only some basics
It's been a long while since I've read a story on webnovel that can actually grab your attention, enthrall you with its characters, and make you believe in a world of fantasy. This is story is a gem. Author should be very proud
Where can i read this for free? Those chapter prices are way too high for me to be able to aford it and i really like this novel, especially the world building
author here: I plotted this story out after reading many good novels on this site. I write for people to enjoy and saw the prompt lining up. please vote if you enjoy it feel free to offer ideas. please note, this story is ONLY on webnovel. cover will be updated later. Thank you all!
Interesting cultivation story with well built world, realms, and professions. Good vile antagonists and well thought out long term plot. The only weak points is that character writing could be better. Many harem members for example are extremely one dimentional with little character development. Overall still a fun story though
This novel needs plentiful time. It might be myself however my attention span dwindled as i had to force myself to read off each given day. I'm sure its a good novel. I will be putting it on hold till maybe I have time.
I think it’s a great story I am disappointed it went the harem route but apart from that I like everything else. I suggest posting this story on other platforms to gain popularity, as the way it is currently set up even if people like the story they can’t justify paying for chapters as they would need to unlock close to a 1000 chapters, so it would increase your fan base if this story was in more platforms being read by more people whilst being more easily accessible without the pay wall
overall, I have greatly enjoyed the first 100 chapters. New experience seeing the MC deal with his heart demons. most novels mcs don't even have this issues. I feel I've over invested into a story I will be dropping due to coin costs for novels these days. if you can afford to, give this book a chance. 103 free chapters to try and draw you in!!
one of the best cultivation novels I've ever read. Great pacing for the characters and story. Time skips used well. MC doesn't go from zero to god in a week, but has good appropriate growth even while becoming very powerful.
around 50 chapter in and not much sign of harem (2 potential were even deflected). this is really good and but it look like it lack popularity. the synopsis honestly sound generic although i admit that i can't think any better. the conflict is well thought out without using those brain dead cliches villain (no father, grandfather, elder, and ancestors coming to get you). there is no system, power mostly come from pure godlike talent and hardwork.
One of my favorite books I've read on here so far❤️ I absolutely adore the main character and the focus on his mental state in the earlier chapters and I'm very very excited to see where the relationships go
nice story, liked the world building, i do not normally write a review but i think this book needs more attention, so here I am :D keep the good work up and hopefully your book will find the hands to more people
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