Douluo Dalu: Blue Lightning Sky Dragon Hammer

writing quality 0 stars, the story should be rewritten. but it has a good concept. i dropped in chapter 5 because it was impossible to not be bored by the story.

Funny with Comedy, little ecchi.. overall balance between seriousness.. I like it... keep going. 🥳🥳[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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reading this book feels like reading Wikipedia. awfully few dialogue and all conversation is summarized by narration. mediocre

Great story so far. Long and developed chapters without cliffhangers. Absolutly amazing how you integrate a bit of AU without ruining the story. Good job buddy, keep going!!!

updates are good writing quality isn't the best but its not bad either people can give this a try its probs a 50/50 chance you'll like it it gets a bit unclear what is happening at times like in chap 10 i was so confused for a while its also very very rushed and the rush is forceful enough to put me off reading further sorry if this gets rewritten with better planning and less rush it would be a solid 4.5 star idea hope it goes well for the OP in the future will check back at some point

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where's raw?.........................,......

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