This is an amazing book just needs to work on writing and grammar a little more.
16 days ago
2
TentaPriest
Hell ya... another 40k book. A good start. don't drop plz.
a month ago
2
Sleeping_dragon26
More capters please
20 days ago
1
Random_Dude_5398
I like the concept but the execution is lacking. Pacing is far too fast and the grammar makes sentences difficult to parce. The plot sounds far more exciting than the execution and some sentences feel like some random dude yelled a spoiler into my brain. Polish your writing and then come back to make a better version.
This is an amazing book just needs to work on writing and grammar a little more.
Hell ya... another 40k book. A good start. don't drop plz.
More capters please
I like the concept but the execution is lacking. Pacing is far too fast and the grammar makes sentences difficult to parce. The plot sounds far more exciting than the execution and some sentences feel like some random dude yelled a spoiler into my brain. Polish your writing and then come back to make a better version.