This is an amazing book just needs to work on writing and grammar a little more.
5 months ago
3
TentaPriest
Hell ya... another 40k book. A good start. don't drop plz.
6 months ago
3
Random_Dude_5398
I like the concept but the execution is lacking. Pacing is far too fast and the grammar makes sentences difficult to parce. The plot sounds far more exciting than the execution and some sentences feel like some random dude yelled a spoiler into my brain. Polish your writing and then come back to make a better version.
5 months ago
2
Sleeping_dragon25
More capters please
6 months ago
2
Astral_Silver
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This is an amazing book just needs to work on writing and grammar a little more.
Hell ya... another 40k book. A good start. don't drop plz.
I like the concept but the execution is lacking. Pacing is far too fast and the grammar makes sentences difficult to parce. The plot sounds far more exciting than the execution and some sentences feel like some random dude yelled a spoiler into my brain. Polish your writing and then come back to make a better version.
More capters please
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