Strongest Kingdom: My Op Kingdom Got Transported Along With Me

WHAT A GEM. I LIKE THE CONCEPT OF THE STORY, ITS LIKE OVERLORD

i like this novel look like overlord and bro this has harem

Overlord, but not as cheesy. This story has immense potential.

The story is very good, especially the kingdom building element. Keep it up author

I definitely reading this as it's very consumables, it's similar to overlord yes but this have its's own sweetness, so I would say this story deserve it's own spotlight [img=Feeling it]

second review. In my first review I pointed out grammatical errors and duplicate paragraphs. have to say that from chapters 50+ this has greatly improved. the pace is decently fast. we get a few looks from other character perspectives to get a feel for the other side. world is a little more fleshed out but both MC and readers still in the dark about many things. kingdom building so far limited to finding lost monster tribes, building 4 special blueprints and a mention about roads. so far no harem and no romance. overall, not a polished gem that would make me beg for more. but I gladly read new chapters once they are available.

It's not a bad fanfiction with an idea similar to the lord, but as for me, I need to open up the world more, work with the characters, make them less flat, give them character. To reveal more about the game he played about the kingdom, it's also worth working on the character of the Main Character. Let's just say it would be interesting to follow the humble protagonist, who has almost no flaws, and power does not spoil him. It will be an interesting story if the main character is not perfect, but with his own problems. for example, arrogance or some other qualities. A person who did not have power before , and then suddenly has power, cannot remain the same person. It is also worth revealing more about magic. Our main character does not use magic, but only skills, that is, he will learn how to use magic, he will become stronger, maybe not much, but it will add a variety of attacks. Revealing the magic would be interesting. I also ask the author to work on the mind of the main character's opponents, I understand our MC hero, but some victories will only bring boredom. Make sure that His Opponents are also smart, otherwise he kills the best adventurers and marshals of the kingdoms somehow quickly. I'm also thinking about other worlds, too, because now he He knows that there are other worlds and it is a sin not to take advantage of this. in general, Istria is not bad, there are pros and cons, there is something to work on, but most importantly, I hope the author listens and makes the story even better, as well as explain the MC's actions, his plans and everything else, we will add more specifics.

The quality of writing for the first 15 chapters is terrible. Then it gets better. Around chapter 28 it becomes solid enough to let you enjoy the story without breaking your immersion. so far no kingdom building and not too sure how the author plans to "build" since he has everything from the first chapter, just locked behind an insufficient population counter. The MC ranges from a timid teenager to a cold hearted overlord in different settings. his character is whatever the author decides that day. The power scaling of levels present in the first 30 chapters is totally random. lvl 80 leader of village. lvl 200 centuries ago became a legend to this day. and 5 chapters later in the same place you have 5 npc lvl 200-350 scared to attack a city defended by 2 lvl 200...

The story is very good, especially the kingdom building element. Keep it up author nice work