I've never expected my life to turn out the way it is. I mean, I was just an ordinary girl... until I met him.
Marco Keller. The mafia underboss who's a cop by day, and a monster with a past so dark that even the shadows couldn't hold it by night.
He's the kind of guy that can make you feel like you're walking on air one minute and then drop you into the deepest hole the next.
But.... Let me tell you, meeting him wasn't a choice. It was fate - And in a strange way, I couldn't run from it... not that I ever truly tried.
it was hard for my interest to be picqued and you took if from me....man congratulations. But seriously your novel is a TV drama level so keep it up and don't let others let you down....you have much much more potential and keep getting better ☺️💪
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Extremely easy to read, and pacing is also fantastic. It starts right in the middle of the action and until the perspective shift, you don't know who all to root for. The characters are quite interesting and dynamic by themselves, but I was most interested in how the author progressed the story so naturally from one chapter to the next. My only criticism could be that the perspective could have stayed with Marco a bit longer in the beginning, but that is quite a minor point. Looking forward to future updates on this : )
Great job author! I like how it's easy to read and pace is alright. Keep uploading more chapters!
I love the synopsis! Especially the last line, that made me want to read the book further! Overall the character interactions and dynamics are pretty good, i like the gunshot scene especially. It brings a sense of foreboding— I look forward to what happens between the two next 🍺🤔