The positive things: The fanfic has decent protagonist that fits nicely in the setting. Haikyuu was rarely chosen as a story setting so I am quite happy to see this fanfic. Reading the interactions between characters is fun but there it is nothing revolutionary.
The negative thing: Sadly, a big negative point for me personally is the sentence structure und the grammar used in this fanfic. I would go as far as call it headache inducing. Let me be clear english is not my native language so my english skill might be limited as one might see in this review. However personally this might the first time that the writing quality forces me to pause between chapters. I hope the author can improve this.
14 hours ago
5
Uzumaki_Kushina_21
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The positive things: The fanfic has decent protagonist that fits nicely in the setting. Haikyuu was rarely chosen as a story setting so I am quite happy to see this fanfic. Reading the interactions between characters is fun but there it is nothing revolutionary. The negative thing: Sadly, a big negative point for me personally is the sentence structure und the grammar used in this fanfic. I would go as far as call it headache inducing. Let me be clear english is not my native language so my english skill might be limited as one might see in this review. However personally this might the first time that the writing quality forces me to pause between chapters. I hope the author can improve this.
I love all haikyuu fanfictions[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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