[WSA 2025 Entry]
"How the hell is this possible?"
Dead in the snow with the rest of his squadron, Mikhail is surprised to find himself regressed in time.
What's worse was that he had no idea how or why he regressed as his memories at the time of death were completely gone.
With the only clue he had, his power of Oaths, also now messed up, Squadron Leader Mikhail Hendrix must now navigate through this changed storyline and try his best to keep his squadron alive.
All the while figuring about his regression and the woman.
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How much money you got? (A lot) How many problems you got? (A lot) How many people done doubted you? (A lot) Left you out to rot? (A lot) How many pray that you flop? (A lot) How many lawyers you got? (A lot) How many times you got shot? (A lot) How many nigs you shot? (A lot) How many times did you ride? (A lot) How many nigs done died? (A lot) How many times did you cheat? (A lot) How many times did you lie? (A lot) How many times did she leave? (A lot) How many times did she cry? (A lot) How many chances she done gave you fuckin around with these thots? (A lot)
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such a good start for a NEWBIE author🔥 good luck!
ABSOLUTE. CINEMA.
Peak starting chapters, waiting for more
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Hello! This is Author's Review here finally. I feel like I have held it on long enough but here it is, please ask all your questions in the replies and I'll do my best to answer! 🖤🖤 Questions related to important plot or spoilers can't be answered unfortunately, I apologize for that!
peak🔥( haven't read it though 😂), I'll read this when there are more ch I'll give my honest review then until then trust my friends above and read it guys..
Ofc ill give my lil bro 5 stars , hope this one doesnt get dropped
Amazing first introductory chapters, I'm already hooked. I hope the author can keep this flow up and empties his stack soon, cause I really can't wait
I don't speak English, so forgive me for any mistakes. Honestly, so far I have nothing to complain about. He introduced a cast of 5 characters to be the main cast, which is a good number and also seems to have a good space to explore all of them The main character is good enough and has potential to be explored, cool action scenes and plots, but for now it's hard to judge very accurately But there are only 2 flaws that bothered me, 1 relatively silly and the other a little more serious Let's start with the silliest one, be careful with the amount of unique terms you put in the work, remember that this is a novel, not a manga or anime, so there is no image If you put an absurd amount of terms like you are doing, there will come a time when, if someone simply stops reading for 1 or 2 months and comes back, they will be completely lost in the work, especially in the attacks. Most of the terms in the works are very intuitive and used in key moments of the work, with chidori and Rasengan You invest a lot in a short time, just be a little careful. Now the most serious thing is about the world building, the dystopian setting is intriguing, I liked how you structured it, but you exaggerated, the examiner scene was really bad Are you telling me that this whole society is so dystopian, but all the cadets outside of Mikhail's squad are simply innocent at that level? Also, the fact that the Dominiques are totally disdainful even makes sense considering the idea of them being on an absolute throne but the others don't make sense, they are soldiers who have gone through everything the others have gone through so their tone at that moment should have been something more complex, something like wanting to pass on a lesson to the next generation or a hatred remembering their past self. Anyway, I had other ideas but absolute disdain with touches of disgust doesn't make sense. I could have done that, but instead of Mikhail reinforcing these actions, there should have been a veiled criticism of him, showing how, although the boy was right about the supervisors being incompetent and incapable of protecting the academy against students who fought for their lives, they are like absolute authorities that cannot be challenged, which would give a new air of refreshing authoritarianism. Besides the functioning of this society, it is not at all functional, but I can ignore that since it is a dystopia, but even within a dystopia there is a very well-established social logic, with powers ensuring that it works, but for now it is forced. But apart from these 2 points the rest is sensational, I hope it continues with enormous potential, congratulations for that
It's quite early to tell whether it will be a good webnovel the story can go in various routes ( the chapter I have read up to) . But still the early chapter were good, I do have great expectations for the novel and I hope the author keeps it. Overall it's worth to give it a try. It's far better than the other novels on this platform 🗑️.
Stopping at chapter 5 because I need to stock the updates. I want to binge read this next month or something. Adios everyone, have fun reading the peak ^^)/ I'll be back soon.
I come here. I check this. I found the sypnosis interesting. I tried reading some chapters. And. For A newbie. It's Peak. Not Gonna Like. It's Peak. The Beginning is peak. And How the story is going. It's also peak. Wating for more.