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All Raven ever wanted was a chance — to go to college, make friends, be loved, and live like any other girl her age. But dreams, it seemed, weren’t meant for people like her.
As a scholarship student at an elite university built for the wealthy and privileged, Raven's life quickly spiraled into a nightmare. Surrounded by cruelty and entitlement, she became the perfect target. Their relentless torment stripped her of everything — her dignity, her hope, her will to live. She bore it all in silence, blaming herself even for the tragedy that tore her family apart. Despair led her to the edge of suicide, but fate had other plans.
Ten years later, those same bullies, now living lavish lives of success and luxury, had long forgotten the girl they destroyed. But Raven hadn’t forgotten them — not one bit.
With scars that ran deep and a heart hardened by pain, she returned — no longer the fragile girl they once broke. One by one, she would visit her tormentors, delivering her own brand of justice and making them learn that every cruel action has a consequence.
Because this time, Raven isn’t the victim.
She’s the reckoning!
This popped up in my recommendations...after reading the reviews gave it a go. wow! I am at the edge of my seat, the main character particular planning and the way story lets us know what happened previously, while keeping us in the loop currently time. What can I say...I am loving it. it's refreshing to have author not be dramatic, or pointlessly lengthen a chapter to get to a point. I cannot wait to see how the story unfolds!
The story is realistic and reflects on the true events that happens in a life of a young girl! It has so many lessons for readers to learn and to grow from them. Great work 👍
I absolutely loved it soo much Please update soon 🙏
Your novel has potential, though I read till 20 chapters for now, I hope you can upload more soon, I would definitely recommend it to anyone.....
Amazing revenge plot, wonderful world development and description. Keep up the good work.
Nice story, compelling characters and overall it's a good book
I recently had the pleasure of reading the first chapter of Raven, and I was thoroughly captivated! Your introduction of Raven is striking; her confident entrance and commanding presence immediately draw the reader in. The elevator scene effectively showcases her power and transformation from victim to avenger, setting a compelling tone for the story. The confrontation with Abe Jenkins is a highlight, with rising tension and visceral moments that keep the reader on edge. The revelation of Jenkins's crimes provides a strong motivation for Raven's revenge, making her actions both understandable and satisfying. While the chapter is impressive, a few minor refinements could enhance the narrative. Consider varying the language to avoid repetition and showing Raven's strong presence through her actions rather than telling. Additionally, integrating Jenkins's information more organically throughout the dialogue would improve the flow. Overall, Chapter 1 is a fantastic start filled with intrigue and excitement. I'm eager to see how Raven's story unfolds! Readers, if you enjoy strong female leads and a compelling revenge plot, this is definitely one to read
love it. Such a start.Fl is also bold. i quite like it.
okay I love a good revenge plot and I Can't wait for our MC to end her enemies literally ☺️ I will enjoy this revenge!
why am i feeling goosebumps just from the synopsis 😳😅
Wow! surely this captivates a new idea of writing.
At first, I thought it was a fantasy novel from the book cover but it wasn't, as I read I saw well character design and good dialogue writing, so keep going!