RAVEN.
All Raven ever wanted was a chance — to go to college, make friends, be loved, and live like any other girl her age. But dreams, it seemed, weren’t meant for people like her.
As a scholarship student at an elite university built for the wealthy and privileged, Raven's life quickly spiraled into a nightmare. Surrounded by cruelty and entitlement, she became the perfect target. Their relentless torment stripped her of everything — her dignity, her hope, her will to live. She bore it all in silence, blaming herself even for the tragedy that tore her family apart. Despair led her to the edge of suicide, but fate had other plans.
Ten years later, those same bullies, now living lavish lives of success and luxury, had long forgotten the girl they destroyed. But Raven hadn’t forgotten them — not one bit.
With scars that ran deep and a heart hardened by pain, she returned — no longer the fragile girl they once broke. One by one, she would visit her tormentors, delivering her own brand of justice and making them learn that every cruel action has a consequence.
Because this time, Raven isn’t the victim.
She’s the reckoning!
The story is realistic and reflects on the true events that happens in a life of a young girl! It has so many lessons for readers to learn and to grow from them. Great work 👍
I absolutely loved it soo much Please update soon 🙏
Amazing revenge plot, wonderful world development and description. Keep up the good work.
Your novel has potential, though I read till 20 chapters for now, I hope you can upload more soon, I would definitely recommend it to anyone.....
This is very solid, exciting and suspenseful story. Raven is captivating, and the conflict is intriguing. The pacing keeps the reader engaged. While there are areas that could be strengthened, it makes the reader want to know what happens next. That is very commendable, given that it's very hard to do. Plus, Raven's past and her connection to the Brant family are particularly compelling, and I'm eager to see how those threads unfold. This story has a good foundation.
Nice story, compelling characters and overall it's a good book
I recently had the pleasure of reading the first chapter of Raven, and I was thoroughly captivated! Your introduction of Raven is striking; her confident entrance and commanding presence immediately draw the reader in. The elevator scene effectively showcases her power and transformation from victim to avenger, setting a compelling tone for the story. The confrontation with Abe Jenkins is a highlight, with rising tension and visceral moments that keep the reader on edge. The revelation of Jenkins's crimes provides a strong motivation for Raven's revenge, making her actions both understandable and satisfying. While the chapter is impressive, a few minor refinements could enhance the narrative. Consider varying the language to avoid repetition and showing Raven's strong presence through her actions rather than telling. Additionally, integrating Jenkins's information more organically throughout the dialogue would improve the flow. Overall, Chapter 1 is a fantastic start filled with intrigue and excitement. I'm eager to see how Raven's story unfolds! Readers, if you enjoy strong female leads and a compelling revenge plot, this is definitely one to read
love it. Such a start.Fl is also bold. i quite like it.
okay I love a good revenge plot and I Can't wait for our MC to end her enemies literally ☺️ I will enjoy this revenge!
why am i feeling goosebumps just from the synopsis 😳😅
Wow! surely this captivates a new idea of writing.
At first, I thought it was a fantasy novel from the book cover but it wasn't, as I read I saw well character design and good dialogue writing, so keep going!