Gridiron Titan: The Rise of Deimon - eyeshield 21 fanfic
Author: jaymerc
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It's an eyeshield 21 fanfic about a linebacker/tight end. please read it to find out more.
PS- its a mix of my own ideas for a story so its probably bad.
PPS- gimme reviews on how I can make the story better in terms of writting
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eyeshield 21 fanfics are as rare as a Phoenix feather giving you 5 stars
This Eyeshield 21 fanfic is absolutely fantastic and a must-read for any fan of the series. The author does an excellent job capturing the spirit of the original while adding unique twists that make the story even more engaging. The character development is well-executed, and the pacing keeps you hooked from start to finish. However, one thing that could make this fanfic even better is more frequent updates. The story is too good to leave readers waiting for long periods! Hopefully, the author will publish new chapters more regularly because this fanfic truly deserves to be continued.
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It was good at first but then you started to write like an a.i, it's not a compliment btw. The characters became repetitive, and some don't feel like their character.