I got heals

you create powers and develop abilities, only to nerf them the next second... The MC develops NEN skills, with flaws and nerfs that shouldn't exist because of the essences he ALREADY possesses... You put flaws in the MC that also shouldn't exist, such as eating disorders, after all, as you said at the beginning of the story very explicitly, the healer essence should cure ALL mental and physiological illnesses and disorders...

There is no good way to review this. It's just awful grammar and piss a poor understanding of what meta essence is

It a good story yet need better grammar

good, don't drop pls ................................. ................................... ................................... ..................................

Okay a quick review for the story *Writing quality*_[3.7 of 5]-It's the typical web novel writing it's not good but it's not bad either the grammar is the thing that's killing the story once that's solved the quality of the novel will improve dramatically. {Advice for the author- After you finish writing the chapter copy it and paste it on Chatgpt or any language AI to help you smoothen things out}. *Story development*_[4.6 of 5]- I'm waiting for the moment he meets Bruce with the Essence of heal imagine his surprise when he sees the amount of injury Bruce has I'd expect a dramatic shout. Back on topic the hits about Gray eventual adoption was a nice touch i like it so far it looks like you know what you're doing so I'll leave you and cook *Character design*_[5? of 5]- Give him black hair and grey or blue eyes and he will practically look like a Wayne. So far we don't have a clear picture of how the mc looks like. *Updating stability*_[3.9/4 of 5]- it's painful slow from my view it needs faster updates *World background*_[5 of 5]- It's DC comics what more do you want

There was something of a good premise early on but you shot it all to hell with a lack of understanding the Essences. The MC himself started out decent but is becoming less and less likable over the past few chapters. I guess what it really comes down to is that you can't do a multi Essence story and then nerf the sh*t out of them. Just call it a special ability at that point. It's like a Saiyan without zenkai or the ability to go Super Saiyan.

That last sentence in the synopsis makes no sense whatsoever. I have not read this novel, but I can already tell this is probably a translated Chinese story

So basically he has op healing, he gets nen. He's the friend of batboi and the batfam, he has a compulsive need to heal, but that doesnt apply to him, he's getting groomed by a two lesbians and their daughter?(idk), he's fat/fit, he likes chubby woman, he's apparently iq smart but retarded emotionally, the grammars absolutely dogshit, and the storyline is mid, thats basically the story

A shitty story with shitty abilities is what someone gets for standing in the first place with such a shitty background, good luck. Most likely, there was still a place for the number of words.

Morrereeeeeeeeeeeee plsssss.............

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More pls.

So the story is good. The powers are fuking cool. The writing could use some work. There are syntax errors and misspelled words. Then there are the biggest problems. The MC i have no problem with his attitude or his cussing. I have a big problem with the ebonics and wigger type slang that make him sound like the dude from Malibu's most wanted. Then he wants to stay fat when, with a minute amount of effort, he could be in perfect shape. I just don't think that's very human. Most people, when giving an easy button to be super attractive, would push it. Those who don't have some sort of fat fetish or take validation in their fat as they are some kind of other like they special because they are different. All in all the MC ruined this for me becaus he is unlikeable in his pursuit of being the cool fat guy.

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