I got heals

you create powers and develop abilities, only to nerf them the next second... The MC develops NEN skills, with flaws and nerfs that shouldn't exist because of the essences he ALREADY possesses... You put flaws in the MC that also shouldn't exist, such as eating disorders, after all, as you said at the beginning of the story very explicitly, the healer essence should cure ALL mental and physiological illnesses and disorders...

There is no good way to review this. It's just awful grammar and piss a poor understanding of what meta essence is

It a good story yet need better grammar

Okay a quick review for the story *Writing quality*_[3.7 of 5]-It's the typical web novel writing it's not good but it's not bad either the grammar is the thing that's killing the story once that's solved the quality of the novel will improve dramatically. {Advice for the author- After you finish writing the chapter copy it and paste it on Chatgpt or any language AI to help you smoothen things out}. *Story development*_[4.6 of 5]- I'm waiting for the moment he meets Bruce with the Essence of heal imagine his surprise when he sees the amount of injury Bruce has I'd expect a dramatic shout. Back on topic the hits about Gray eventual adoption was a nice touch i like it so far it looks like you know what you're doing so I'll leave you and cook *Character design*_[5? of 5]- Give him black hair and grey or blue eyes and he will practically look like a Wayne. So far we don't have a clear picture of how the mc looks like. *Updating stability*_[3.9/4 of 5]- it's painful slow from my view it needs faster updates *World background*_[5 of 5]- It's DC comics what more do you want

good, don't drop pls ................................. ................................... ................................... ..................................

That last sentence in the synopsis makes no sense whatsoever. I have not read this novel, but I can already tell this is probably a translated Chinese story

A shitty story with shitty abilities is what someone gets for standing in the first place with such a shitty background, good luck. Most likely, there was still a place for the number of words.

Morrereeeeeeeeeeeee plsssss.............

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More pls.

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There was something of a good premise early on but you shot it all to hell with a lack of understanding the Essences. The MC himself started out decent but is becoming less and less likable over the past few chapters. I guess what it really comes down to is that you can't do a multi Essence story and then nerf the sh*t out of them. Just call it a special ability at that point. It's like a Saiyan without zenkai or the ability to go Super Saiyan.

Really bad grammar

ff interesting but grammer bad. If the grammer is improved, this fic can be a good read. Best of luck to the authors for this book. 👍👍