Coast of Truth: The Evil Beyond Lies

Absolutely cinema , although there's room for development, everyone does it's overall not a waste of time.

hello this is Author, I am not beneath reviewing for my own novel, the novel is good. you might find some small mistakes like casing but as a reader they wont really make much difference. read if you want your mind blown and loose sleep on what's going to happen next.

An absolutely stunning opening, breath-taking action, and fighting ingenuity. This story is well balanced, though it's a shame the chapters are quite short, but I held my breath reading so far. Have to say the world-building is truly captivating too.

It's such a good book!!! I'm reserving all 5 stars for when more chapters come out So far though, the characters and the pacing of the story seem to be just right

It's a good example of how to develop a system novel. The writer did a good job with opening and throughing the mc right into the action but also adding meaning to it. The way the world was explained was logical and made sense, and it wasn't overwhelming it was simple and to the point. Great story overall and ill be adding it to my library's

The beginning of the novel is good. Your approach of making the introduction(chapter 0) philosophical is intriguing. As I read further, I found the build up to be good too, even though I thought some things were odd, but that didn't affect the quality and flow. The scenes are interesting and that seems to be your strongest point so far, like, you are very good at writing moments. The problem I had in the middle is how much of it was "filler". A decent bit of it was character information and skill information (system time) that didn't really move things ahead but rather slowed them down and broke my immersion. I can't say much about the character design since there's not much to go off of. Most of the beginning was action and it's in the most recent chapters that you started showing his initial disposition. I guess we'll see...

Potential! I must say, it is exciting diving into the world. While it's not without flaws, the potential of the plot and promise on display are certainly good. Writing - Needs improvement. A lot. But it's readable, understable and sufficient. Still, if the author can improve the writing by a level or two, it will be amazing. Tip- Focus on some realistic reactions from characters, situations and such. Plot- Since there isn't much of plot given till now, I have considered it's potential. If The author plays it right, the plot can become a great piece among 'system' contents. Character - Dialogues! they make or break the characters and it is good to see, character have plenty interaction. Well done there. Just needs some refinement. World Building- Although not unique in its genre with systems, ranks, monsters, etc. I could understand the world quite a lot from the first 15 chapters. So, I would say it was done great. Well, there is more to explore in future, so I belive again in it's potential. Overall, it is a good story. Needs editing and refinements, but still enjoyable.

One thing I would point out is that it's so simple yet easy to understand the world building that gradually happens, and how the plot manifests itself through the MC's actions and choices. Although there is very much room for improvement with as good as it is, it was definitely quite the enjoyable read. Keep it up, mate

This novel pulled me in from the first sentence! The eerie, poetic tone mixed with vivid descriptions makes every moment feel immersive. The tension, mystery, and fast-paced action are so well balanced, I couldn't look away. The writing is gripping, and I can't wait to read more. Amazing job! :3

This novel is too good among the cheesy ones for romance and all. Gaming has always been a fun part of the life everyone has at some phase and that collaborating with novel makes this moree fun. Creative thinking is the main thing I love about this novel. I love this novel. In childhood, we loving watch adventures and now I love reading this 😌