If you found yourself in the Marvel universe, what would you wish for? To be rich and smart like Tony Stark, or to have a very strong mutant power, or to lose creativity and just wish for system. Ian got all three, so what do you think he would do? Add the novel to your library, and if you like it, add your free power stone daily because I will update at least one chapter daily.
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i think lacks too much information on many things. certain things are forced to happen or used just because, they don't even feel natural at all. this FF needs a lot or work to be considered good writing quality 3/5 the point of shift too suddenly without prior warning sometimes causing confusion when reading the story stability of update 5/5 it has daily updates story development 3/5 i feel like the story has no real goal at all. does he focus on science or politics to get power. understanding something doesn't equate you can control or even view it. just because he understands spatial-temporal law doesn't mean he can see the time flow. character design 2/5 the MC has no personality, is he cunning, lewd or what? world background 2/5 not enough description on what kind of earth the MC resides. General lacks too may information. 1. about the MC or the world where he lives 2. what is rule runes? 3. too little information on the system. i think it is better to name the system "automatic knowledge brain upload"
It says "anything" does that mean he can learn Mutant ability if he know how?
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It is good (mid) but it just lacks magic
I feel like this novel has potential but I do think it needs to be rewritten. we are introduced to the MC in this universe way later than expected, the MC has already developed a 'personality' in this universe. also we have no idea how this system works. in my opinion it is also very fast-paced, way faster than i am comfortable reading anyway. All in all I would say, if you started the story when the MC transmigrated to this universe and just gave us like 2ish chapters of introduction to the MC and to the system it would already be leagues better, but that is just my opinion.
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its okay the character and the story are all pretty good. But im just getting kinda bored with the plot. Also the MC really hasnt done anything not that i want him to become a chad that beats up people. This seems more like thinly veiled kingdom building in marvel. Still the writting is decently done the mc personality is okay so i hope this multiverse bull crap gets done quick and the plot becomes good again.
Mc is strong not op but he is still stronger than the enemies he faces and he does not interfere in the events unless he gains something I just hope the author will quickly skip the events that Mc is not involved in
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