All the Elders in My Sect Are My Avatars!

Hello! I am Tigr4! This is my first original story and the second one I've posted, with the first being a fanfiction. I won’t talk about my first work posted because it was quite disappointing, and I made a lot of mistakes with it. But this one is different… I think. Here are some things you can expect from this story: First: A reasonably decent romance, I believe, and fun to read. Second: A character with a mindset very different from typical Xianxia protagonists. He’s not obsessed with perfection at every step, and as strange as it sounds, it actually makes sense. Every Xianxia protagonist seems obsessed with achieving perfection, often making their journey much harder than if they were simply "normal." Why face 500 million celestial tribulation lightning bolts when the usual is just 9? All for a power that supposedly allows fighting between realms, yet in the final stages of cultivation, perfection often doesn't make much of a difference, and, most of the time, they can barely defeat someone just a few levels above them within the same realm. The fact is, as surprising as it may seem, they pursue this perfection and nearly die countless times for it. And what’s the ultimate goal? Immortality! They almost kill themselves repeatedly, relying on "plot armor" just to survive the disasters they themselves cause in the pursuit of immortality. Typical features of perfection in Xianxia stories: fighting between realms, and a slow, problematic level-up progression compared to what the MCs should reach. My MC will only pursue "near-perfection," fight between realms, and have a much faster level-up progression. Third: What kind of second was that? Is this crazy author insane?! Fourth: In the first 5 chapters, I messed up the word count, and they ended up being short. I made the following chapters much longer, and by chapter 12, they already exceeded 15,000 words. The average now is 1,500 words or more, excluding the first few chapters. Fifth: There is no fifth point. Sixth: Leave some Power Stones and happy comments, don’t disrespect me, or I’ll cry! Seventh: In the first 13 chapters, the MC is quite lonely. Personally, I like the story more from chapter 14 onwards. Eighth: Eighth. Ninth: Oh, I just remembered now that this is a list of what to expect...

I can't believe I lived long enough to see a cultivation story where the characters seem like real people, the system is balanced, the growth is constant and the MC's personality is very human, not absolute evil or absolute good, but someone with greed, desires, lust but who, like any normal person, holds back and tries to be a good person (and no, the MC doesn't seem forced but natural, being good when he can, but always taking into account his own desires and feelings).

Well... it's very good! Having a Chinese fantasy with a Western perspective is much more enjoyable to read, mainly because the mentality is similar, so we can identify much more with the MC, this story is still young (70+ chaps), but I already see great potential.

- The story is, seemingly, made without Ai. Whilst being of really good quality. There’s nearly no errors. - It's original, maybe there’s a cliche here and there, but it wouldn’t be a xianxia story without them. - The MC is realistic, whilst not being a mûrder hobo. - There’s an engaging romance early on that doesn’t feel rushed, and we don’t have to read through an MC being so dense that it takes 200+ chapters for it to develop. - He’s strong, but he doesn’t feel invincible, and while he’s not a coward, he’s still cautious. - His cheat might be the most original one of any stories I’ve read. The only real complaints I have is that there isn’t enough chapters, and that there are a lot of lengthy explanations in multiple chapters. And one thing I would say is that, instead of saying his avatars names, you should just say the position they have. Finally, this is one off, if not the best cultivation story I have had the pleasure to read.

Absolutely captivating, I love that he isn't a typical young master and i like the Robin hood early parts, where the familis where robbed lol, the writing is impeccable and easy to understand, keep up the fantastic work

I appreciate the wonderful, marvelous, excellent effort you have put into this work. Here's my graceful vote of thanks 😃👍💎. Ok, Enough flowery words... But do keep it up! 💎.

Writing Quality: I barely noticed any grammar errors, and that really means a lot to me. Stability of Updates: Well, there are 85 chapters in just two months—I think that's pretty impressive. Story Development: It's xianxia, so you know what to expect. That said, the avatar system is pretty unique, and I'm really enjoying reading about it. The romance is pretty good in my eyes—some people might think it's rushed, but if the alternative is 500+ chapters of the MC being dense, I’ll definitely take this. Character Design: Nothing particularly special, but I’m having fun, and that’s what matters. World Background: We're gradually learning more about the world as the story progresses, and that’s been fun to experience. Note: I'm not a critic and I don’t write reviews often, so take my words with a grain of salt. I just think it’s a good story and wanted to write this in hopes of it getting more attention.

This is one of the most well written cultivation novels I have read. It has one of the most realistic portrayals of love and the main character seems realistic. At most the side characters are a bit cliche, but it makes sense in universe and they are based of the “young master” cliche. It has great humor and it flowed smoothly till I stopped at ch 25. All in all, 10/10 novel.

I have not read it yet, this is just a review to support the author on his first original story. I will update this review in the future depending on if I like where the story is going or not. Until then good luck author!