X-GENE OMNITRIX

"I'm writing this story every day without stacking chapters—I’m letting the story unfold as it comes to me, so I don’t know exactly how it will end. When I started, I only wanted to gave Alex a watch with Master Control because, in my first fanfiction, Omnitrix in the MCU, readers requested it. Initially, this was going to be a reincarnation story with a watch, featuring a strong and action-packed protagonist. However, instead of a typical cool and overpowered MC, I decided to create a broken yet badass character with flaws. I did this to challenge myself and learn how to write such a character. Not everyone may like it, but for me, it's a learning experience."

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The beginning is very interesting ................................................................................................................

The author has contained the story in a good way or best way not like good hero crap or whatever and it's fun to read and worth the time

This is very good, only problem is the number of chapters,the concept of mc capable of transforming into characters from different anime is just so good.

Loveing it up until now Hope you don't drop it

well this have an advanced tech ? If remember correctly there should be a alien with high IQ, right?.

It's a good novel if you like mc trying to discover himself, but personally I don't like it. Read to chapter 7 and dropped. I am a machiavellian so I don't really enjoy or like stories or things like this. The mc is quite really confused which I understand but i don't really care. The x men are just really annoying and sickening for me personally and even magneto and the rest are just annoying. If I was here, I'm probably sure I will have killed every person in this novel or blessed them, well that's just me as I don't care about the cries of the desperate or the innocent or cries of the strong, only if it benefits me.

Story is good the only problem I have is the begging for powerstones at the end of each chapter. Because it is like eating a really delicious chocolate only for it to have a bitter center filled with shit.

I am giving this fic 5 star because i don't want to ruin author's creativity... but i will not read it any further because it is not for me, it made me cringe too many times. sorry

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This story is just starting out, so I don't have an exact idea of how the quality will be later. However, so far, this is great. The concept of it is a goldmine, especially with the omnitrix having that little twist to it that makes it more powerful than the normal one. The original omnitrix doesn't have many options against higher beings in Marvel unless he wants to start spamming alien X once his enemies are past a certain power level. Now, with it's twist it can be comfortably used against more powerful enemies and with the mc having to grow into his power, we don't have to worry about a super OP protagonist that bulldozer everything with no struggle. The emotions so far have been strong and understanding in a way that makes sense without the reader going, "bro what?" Like most lower quality fanfics. All together, great, and I'd love to see where this goes!

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everything is perfect and amazing, I really hope you don't make the mc choose between the brotherhood or the x man, it's better if he leaves them the xmen are goody two shoes and not compatible with the mc and the brotherhood wants to use him as a tool so that's a no go, it's better if he lives on his own goes to midtown high or another school and take the story from there.