X-GENE OMNITRIX

"I'm writing this story every day without stacking chapters—I’m letting the story unfold as it comes to me, so I don’t know exactly how it will end. When I started, I only wanted to gave Alex a watch with Master Control because, in my first fanfiction, Omnitrix in the MCU, readers requested it. Initially, this was going to be a reincarnation story with a watch, featuring a strong and action-packed protagonist. However, instead of a typical cool and overpowered MC, I decided to create a broken yet badass character with flaws. I did this to challenge myself and learn how to write such a character. Not everyone may like it, but for me, it's a learning experience."

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The beginning is very interesting ................................................................................................................

This is very good, only problem is the number of chapters,the concept of mc capable of transforming into characters from different anime is just so good.

The author has contained the story in a good way or best way not like good hero crap or whatever and it's fun to read and worth the time

This has a lot of potential but I think chapter 15 has kinda proved the author picked something too op to give the mc and can’t handle it plot wise so he’s gotta make stuff up so the mc can’t fight and it makes a lame read compared to the first few chapters. I get that he wanted to give the mc a set back but it felt so forced by plot and he spent years being tortured he didn’t need a set back you did.

Loveing it up until now Hope you don't drop it

well this have an advanced tech ? If remember correctly there should be a alien with high IQ, right?.

Story is good the only problem I have is the begging for powerstones at the end of each chapter. Because it is like eating a really delicious chocolate only for it to have a bitter center filled with shit.

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This story is just starting out, so I don't have an exact idea of how the quality will be later. However, so far, this is great. The concept of it is a goldmine, especially with the omnitrix having that little twist to it that makes it more powerful than the normal one. The original omnitrix doesn't have many options against higher beings in Marvel unless he wants to start spamming alien X once his enemies are past a certain power level. Now, with it's twist it can be comfortably used against more powerful enemies and with the mc having to grow into his power, we don't have to worry about a super OP protagonist that bulldozer everything with no struggle. The emotions so far have been strong and understanding in a way that makes sense without the reader going, "bro what?" Like most lower quality fanfics. All together, great, and I'd love to see where this goes!

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everything is perfect and amazing, I really hope you don't make the mc choose between the brotherhood or the x man, it's better if he leaves them the xmen are goody two shoes and not compatible with the mc and the brotherhood wants to use him as a tool so that's a no go, it's better if he lives on his own goes to midtown high or another school and take the story from there.

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